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by maclynn

person Bards Apprentice
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i'm certainly looking forward to more. ^_^
u have an interesting perspective on Aya -most ppl make him more hard-headed. i like this self-aware, but taciturn version better i think.

& i love the placement & plotline within the series -simply masterful.

however, it still seems to lack something.....*shrug* more comedy?....oh well, i still like it. ^_^
...& there was that moment of Aya making Yohji's jaw drop before the shower that made me smirk.....^_~
person zetsuai2005
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yohji... too wiped out to realise that the answer to all his problems is about to knock on his door. I usually don't think of Aya as the 'comforting' type, but if he can help Yohji through a nightmare maybe Yohji will let him help with some of his other issues. This is a good story, a switch from the ones that always have Aya being the one in need. Looks like a more mature, grounded Aya who's actually in a shape to help someone. This is good character development for both of them; but, of course, I still hope they screw like bunnies. Looking forward to more.

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