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*pout* you make me sad...

But damn! you're /good/

I truly can't believe you don't have more reviews. Your writing is intense, well put-together, and very erotic without being over-graphic and repetitive. For your chosen characters, you do an excellent job of immersing yourself in their psyches and personalities, and you don't seem to be afraid to try different combinations of pairings. ;) The only thing I haven't seen yet is Yohji/Crawford and at this rate, I'm sure you will get around to it soon enough. Your style is crisp and precise, and the stories themselves move along at a very good pace, which is not a bad thing in fanfiction. You have a spectacular way of drawing your readers along throughout the story, and I for one look forward to seeing what new works you come up with. I hope that you keep up your writing.

I loved that. It was perfectly in character; brutal, fast, and dangerous, just as it should be. The sexiness wasn't in the act but the sense of combat. I wish I could write edgy and gritty like this.