rate_review Reviews

I like this story. One of my favorite aspects was that no character was truly unlikeable. I also felt you were loyal to the characters' personalities. Gr8 job.

is that the end....I got to know what happens in the end

That was so sad (crys in corner)Pick Davis! He was there first! You know she loves him!^^ Pleaseee continue!

Wow! This story is absolutely amazing! I can't wait to see how it ends. :D

I must say that I've never fallen in love with a fan-fic before. I've enjoyed them of course, but I really LOVE this one. ^___^ Your writing style is really awesome, and I love the way you describe everything. I got so into the story that I almost cried along with Kari at several parts!

Bravo, I must say! *claps wildly*

Another absolutely, astonishing chapter. I love how you have so much emotion in this chapter. With T.K proposing to Kari and her not sure about whether accepting it or not. It truely does have that mixed feelings involved that truely does happen in real life. It's not where he dumps her and she goes crashing in Daisukes arms. It's more than that. Absolutely superb! I do apologize for my lateness in reviewing. I'm slightly lazy when it comes to these. But once again, an excellent chapter and a story that I'm always looking forward to coming back too. Great Job and cannot wait to see what the outcome of this is going to be like.

Until next time!

Excellent writing skills! One of the best stories I've read. I'm very anxious to read what happens next.

Absolutely brilliant of a story. I don't get to involved with Daisuke and Hikari fanfics but this fic is superb. You have made Daisuke into a much loving type of character. His attitude is much more mature than what many writers make him out to be.

Your writing is excellent as well. Your dialogue the description; just purely excellent. I must say, I cannot wait until the next chapter of this fic.

Until next time...

Inkster

onegai....add more pleaseeee

i was so excited to see that you had updated this story, and i must say this is one of my favourite chapters, well besides davis unexpecatdly kissing kari infront of TK. *chuckles* looking forward to the next updates, altho, i really do not want to see this story end.

-Macailla*

it's been so long since an update :(