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omg !!! please update this !! i have grown very Very fond of this story, and i must see where it leads to next.

one of my favs!

yours truely

Macailla

ummmmmmmmmmmmm........... i agree with ilovenesha, escept for I think he meant pairing instead of painting. I would like the TK/Kari/Davis idea, but whoever she ends up with, i will be pleased. Both Davis and TK are amazing.

The part where Davis kissed Kari was confusing. I couldn't tell whether anyone was there watching or what the hell was happening. People were talking and I thought they were gone. etc.


and the part where Kari asks Davis to spend her birthday with her? For one, slut. Normally I don't really care when something is well written and the plot seems to be going somewhere but its all just getting out of hand and cliche. Second, it seemed extrememly forced. I'm going to still read but I'll probably only skim from now on unless I get hooked again.

This story is amazing! I have my fingers crossed for a Takari painting over a Daikari painting. However, if the story becomes a relationship with all three of them liking each other, that would be even better! lol. Go TK!

MORE MORE MORE!!!

yay. this chapter was so good.

Hey! no man, this is good, please do continue!

I'm sorry to hear that people are bashing the french dialouge. I didn't mind it at all, eventhough I've been studying the language for long. People should've had better things to focus on while reading in my opinion. I'm glad to say that I found your stories and this one in particular. I love the way you portray all of the characters! I also love how TK isn't a Bad Guy so that the choice of Kairi's should be obvious for the reader. it feels more true to life in my opinion. I'm rooting for Daisuke as I love his character in this fanfic. I hope that you'll feel more confident soon, wether about this fic or something else.

My god, this story has me HOOKED! Read from 1 to 20, then went CRAP! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! Really waiting on the next chapter, loving everything about it so far.

Yup. Me again. I just read Chap 20. Although I was saddened that chap 19 was not a dream, I suppose I get why you did it. Though I still hope for Davis and Kari to get together in the end (yea, I like my played out romantic stories, so what?) I do expect the drama. Then again, TK is technically (I would guess) the "good guy" in this story, so if Davis won in the end, it wouldnt be a played out romance... Huh. I dunno. But still! Heh. I really enjoyed this chapter (though it seemed too short. I kept hoping for more drama to be crammed in one chapter).

PLEASE dont put off furthering this story too long. I truly look forward to each chapter! :)