rate_review Reviews

Sorry to hear about all those flame reviews, those guys are idiots. I'll admit I was a little disappointed to see Kari losing her virginity to TK, but hey she is a little confused type of chick and her running of to TK after being rejected by Davis is a very possible scenario. So don't give a shit to the people whose buttons are so easily pushed and keep up the good work!

Only one request, give this story a happy ending,okay? *puppy eyes* lol

... I would like to apologize if my review on Mediaminer.org seemed like a flame or that I was mad that this happened. I did not mean to make it sound like that. If I did, then, again, I am sorry for it. This chapter was a very good conclusion for what happened in chapter 19, As I thought, tears, anger, and broken hearts. Sorry that everyone, including myself if I offended you, gave you a hard time about chapter 19...

Hi ya... I think it was a good Idea for you to make Kair louse herself to tk, Hey I agre with you... And Great Idea about making it longer. A Idea is to have Kair relize that she loves Davis and finds out that Cathren (Not spelled right) Is fucking him and have Kairr go crazy on her. And A nother Idea is i the end have Kair go to Tai and tall him that she's pregnet. When he asked If it was her boyfriend have her not know becaues she fucks Davis wile Tk is away. (I think that's what you had that little thing all ready pland out) And loving the story so far.

I feel like you do with the stupid little complainers. One of my stories simple got "waste of time"

anyway, the story is coming along good, i always check for updated chapters, so the break you are taking is going leave me with anticipation.

I kind of do, actually, agree with annonymous. you don't really even have to be fluent in french to be confused. I didn't at all get the "Manquer Catherine" bit, for example. I thought it was her last name or something. also, kind of what I said last time about the whole "mon nom est..." bit.
but, in order to make this constructive criticism, I think that in future situations you should, in order to not confuse people and possibly save you a lot of work, just say that Catherine is speaking in French, but type in English, or just don't say what she's supposed to be saying at all, if Davis can't even understand it. just be like "ranting in French" or something.
Anyway, it is a really good story like I said before. I just agree that the translator french is kind of not adding to your story.

Uh, perhaps Im mistaken, but I dont think the point of the story is to be centered around how well the ONE character can speak french.

So give it a rest. So what if the french is wrong. The story is amazing. Besides, the only people who would notice would have to be fairly fluent in the language, and if they were, they shouldnt care. It may annoy them, but get over it. Its not like its written entirely in french. That would be understandable.

ANYWAY! To the author, I dont know you, but I hope all this said nonsense does not discourage you from continuing the story. There are plenty more people who are biting their nails for the next chapter to be released than there are people grinding their teeth to bad verb tense or whatever. :) LOVE IT!

(and dont pick apart my english. Its 2am, and I have finals in 6 hours...)

Oh no! Not TK! Chapter 19 has to be a dream or I will cry... ;_; My poor Daisuke. TK needs to step off!

Anyway, this is one of the most fascinating fics here. I just recently got back interested in Digimon (and I only like the first 2 seasons) and my love for Daisuke drove me too researching fics out there of him. I really hope you keep this up and dont die out like a lot of writers do when they write fics with many chapters. I will check back for updates! Cant wait! :D

((ps, Daisuke has to win...)) ;D

Whoops! Another comment! Sorry.

I just discovered you hate TK (according to your fanfiction.net profile), so why are you giving him such a major role? Hopefully, since you hate him, he will get crushed. >:D But yea. Hope to see an update soon! I cant wait to see what Davis' move is!

((but she gave herself up already!!)) Yes, im still crying. haha.

Nooo... *collapses at authors feet* Why? Why did it have to be TK? I mean I love TK and all, but why? *goes off to cry in the corner*

Ooooh! Do you not believe that the good guy always comes last? Or that bad boys are the best?

No complaints though. Hotness appresiated. Thank you.