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NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!NO!NO!NO!NO!NO!NO!NO!NO!NO!NO!NO!NO!!!!! WHY!!!! GOD!!!! WHY!!!why does it have to be TK!!!!i HATE HIM!!!!DAVIS is SO much BETTER!!!!for a minute while i was reading it i thought davis would like come in and save her from that guy!!!i thought u said that this was going to be a Davis and kari story!!! don't get me wrong i luv this stori not just that part!!i think she should have done it with davis!!he is so much more hotter and bad ass!!!but pls update!!!i can't wait what will happen next!!!will davis beat up TK?!?!how will davis feel when he finds out?!?! what would happen when TK answers kari's door naked and davis sees a naked kari behind only in a bad sheet?!?!?!will he go balistic?!?!OH!!!!the possiblities!!!!i just can't WAIT!!!!

aww. sorry about your flame. this was a good chapter.
I really like your story, but I kind of have to agree that your french is off. I also thought you were using an online translator of some kind.
I don't know...do you speak french?
just like..a lot of basic things from like French 1 in like...heh...probbaly 8th grade is like "je m'appelle" and not "mon nom est". like I don't know, just really basic things from the language that I thought were drilled into anyone learning french.


anyway, it is a good story, maybe you should just look over the french bits again.

Squee!!! I love your story!!! I want the next chapter!!!

i'm suprised this doesn't have more reviews
good story.

good story

I'm finally back! haha. I just caught up on all of the action in this story! You never cease to amaze me!!! I was sorta sad when I read that your story might close soon but then I read the 15th lesson and I am so glad to hear that ideas are floating into your head! I just hope those ideas are posted as stories soon! XD I thought the Jun and Davis thing was so cute. I mean, I was upset that Jun would do that to Davis at first but then the whole sibling thing is something that would definitely happen in real life too. So cute. Oh and Kari's obsession with Hello Kitty? haha. I hope the date ends well with Davis and Kari. As I've stated before, I think they should get together but not until the very end. All the hardships make the relationship more worthwhile you know? Exactly how everyone should experience love. Very, very cute Nesha! And I promise not to be gone for so long ever again!!! XD Keep up the AWESOME work!!! <3

oi, this was...new, and not stereotyped :P

its really realy really good, this is like the only story i bother to read here!!!!! >< plzzz updateeeeeeee

screaming fan...XD

Ahhhhh! I'm so glad that something happened between TK and Kari now because things seem to be getting interesting!! I feel so bad for Davis! This is the first time he's ever really valued a girl for more than the sex. I really hope things work out in the end but I'm dying to read the next chapter! And I'm so glad that you decided to put up a looong story haha. None of that abrupt ending stuff. Keep up the amazingness! XD

And I'm jealous that you can just write haha. I might e-mail you just so we can talk sometime!

i love he plot.
alot of stories are pointless shag scripts.