rate_review Reviews

Your writing is excellent and the story is a great read. Nice build up, and I think holding Davis and Kari's full out sex scene (or the one I anticipate will be coming) was a good move. At the risk of sounding corny, it makes it more special and fulfilling to read that way.

Keep up the good work.

I think I might die. I love this story. It's not just mindless sex story. Gosh a monkey, I wish I was as good a writer as you!!! And I really hope Kairi doesn't still love T.K. because Davis is definitely in love with her for more than her body. Very, very nice. Keep writing!!! :)

THIS STORY WAS AWESOME! I really hope that it is updated soon! I think this was the story that mainly got me to get an account here. I thought just the style of your writing and how you made the events so realistic and...ah! It was just amazing! I hope you can review the Digimon one that I'm trying to finish haha. I have yet to put up one chapter though! If you finish the 7th lesson, please e-mail it to me! Or I'll just come on here if it's too much of a hassle. And amazing ending on the 6th one. Ahhh, makes me want that to happen to me!