rate_review Reviews

I like this story a lot. I think that YxS pairings are always interesting and under rated. This is a good start to a longer story.

My only suggestion is to get a beta reader. Some of it felt rushed, and a beta cn help smooth it out. I hope to see more of your writing soon.

I think it takes a completely disturbed individual to actually sleep with someone you KNOW will kill you with the least bit provocation. That's just... crazy. Crazier than Farf on bad night. Or would Schu do that? Exactly WHO is that longing stare and unanswered question for? I'm so not into mushy and no mush to be found anywhere! It's not drabble dearest. This is a perfect example of why they call it fiction. Fantasy/make-believe that is written so well it seems real enough to actually happen, raises questions and gives insights, makes the characters people instead of words on the page and, most importantly, makes you want to turn the page... And I do. And that's in only 3 chapters:)

very nice. i'm wondering if there's more coming in this..... i hope so. ^_^

very nice. ^_^
sweet, & yet still Schuldig-licious.
is there any more to this?

this was a good first chapter. and i want
to see what happens next.

yep, I detect definite signs of 'going somewhere' in that fic. Hope you're ready for the ride!

Oh please say you are continuing this!