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It's fun and bizarre to see the way Tohma and Taki's relationship changes: going from unpleasant to mushy and right now it likes back to unpleasant.

As for the fic your friend is looking for, it might be this one: http://fiction.gurabiteshiyon.net/story.php?no=2213

Eeek! Poor Taki. One has to wonder if this sudden inability to move is due to Tohma being near him. In either case, it'll be some interesting drama.

Hooboy. That's an interesting arrangement. It seems deceptively opened ended and fair, but with plenty of ways to abuse it. I can't wait to see what Tohma has in mind and how Taki tries to out manuever him.

I like the contrast between the two pairings being presented in these chapters. The relative innocence and inexperience of Haido and Kenji's encounter verses the more experienced and manipultive act going on between Taki and Tohma is a nice interplay.

It'll also be really intriguing to see what happens with both pairs when the lust induced daze recedes.

As fun as it was to see things heat up physically between Taki and Tohma, I enjoyed the emotional conflict much more and felt it really added depth to this chapter. Taki's vulunerability and Tohma's controling nature added an extra tension to the scene and the reader has the feeling that there are real stakes on the line.

As always, I look forward to more.

I can't wait to see what's coming up next, considering that you've left us with this really tense situation between the members of Opium (which will no doubt hit the breaking point when they find themselves locked in the same room together) and also the subtle attraction between Taki and Tohma.

As always, I'm loving your work and I happily await the next chapter.

Yes, I did read and review "Torture Chamber" once or twice I believe. I had wondered if you were the same people who'd worked on it, but I hadn't been sure.

Oh and a sequel is definitly appreciated not just by me, but by the other readers including the silent ones who haven't reviewed.

I can't wait until the next time Taki and Opium are in the same room. Things are already tense between them with the way Taki has been pushing them and with Haido's injury slowing the band down, so I'm sure this is going to cause things to go overboard or at least create a lot of tension.

I am also loving Haido and Kenji. The get together hasn't been agonizingly slow, nor has it been out of the blue. The pace feels just about right.

Looking forward to more as always.

I am loving the developing relationship between Kenji and Haido and can't wait to see what comes out of it. I also can't wait to see what happens when Ken comes into picture. You do an excellent job of keeping the reader on their toes.

Ohh!! Haha I like it! so far. and I'm curious to find out whats komming up next.. ethere way pleas update soon ^^

I like the way these two interact in this fic. It seems so perfectly in character for both of them.

I also have to say that I admire the way you give us information without info dumping. Instead of writing a whole big flabby paragraph about what Taki's been doing during the past two years, you only reveal the information when neccesary.

Also, the fact that the story is thirty chapters and counting fills me with glee. Hopefully other people will give this story a chance and review.