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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thanks for the hot Hentia action between Hakkai and Yaoni. I'm a huge fan of siayuki yaoi as much as the next fan girl, but it's nice to see a little man/women ineraction to break up the tons of yaoi out there.
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woooo!! i love storys where hakkai shows his dark side! >_< eek! be still my heart!
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well done smut. and since i'm 39, 58 person, this story falls into one of my preferred pairing, which is good.
the story was nicely done, and the progression is believable.
a nice one.
the story was nicely done, and the progression is believable.
a nice one.
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm. yeah, i was expecting doku/jien (easier to use jien).
a friend and i were debating jien and kou.
i said jien holds a special place with kou.
if you notice, he is the only one who can call kougaiji by his nick, kou
kou, being a demon lord, must be treated with respect, and doku (jien)
is very familiar with him.... there must be a story regarding that familiarity, yes?
interesting masturbation scene you had....
a friend and i were debating jien and kou.
i said jien holds a special place with kou.
if you notice, he is the only one who can call kougaiji by his nick, kou
kou, being a demon lord, must be treated with respect, and doku (jien)
is very familiar with him.... there must be a story regarding that familiarity, yes?
interesting masturbation scene you had....
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was totally hot, best one shot so far. I'd like to find out how Goku learned to kiss and with whom.
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmmm... good stuff
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome! I specially liked the third chapter, but all of them were actually pretty good. Keep writing!
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You did a really good job! I would not have thought it could have been done and done in character but I think you did it at least that is my openion.
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing Chapter one-- Oh, wow, This was written very nicely. So many of them are just the same thing all the time but this was written really well and I enjoyed it very much. It was very hot, too which doesn't hurt the story. lol
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoohoo! That was hot! I don't normally go for Gojyo/Hakkai, but I cannot deny that your story was intense. Well done!