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Every time I read this, I cry. Seriously, I can't give it higher praise than that. This is so beautiful and moving and half the time, I don't know if I'm bawling because I'm happy or sad.

Thank you.

Well, unlike everyone else, I can't blow sunshine up your rear about this--You really shouldn't use cancer as a tool for slash. There's nothing romantic about dying of cancer--in love or otherwise. If you've ever actually experienced it--even second-hand--it's a very nasty and PAINFUL slow-rotting disease. They don't load up cancer patients with morphine because "it won't hurt". This could've been overlooked if the writing/situation was at least somewhat realistic, but unfortunately... Sorry this had to be an ACTUAL critique, but look on the bright side; hearing the bad along with the good will serve more than a writer's ego by making them better writers.

By the way--the "bed-thing" is an examination table.

oh, that was so sad... The last sentences I can't stop crying

Wonderfull story, really.

This was so sad but so cute, i love the twins! construstive critisism: you could have extended either parts to include what happened after they died, or after the new twins were born. other than that i loved it good job

Gahh... I started tearing up when the doctor and Kaoru were talking, and then I cried when they died. -sniffle- It's so good though... need to read the next chapter xD

.....AWW! They name their reincarnations after them... -tear-

Oh Gosh. What a wonderful fic...

I couldn't help but cry though. Wonderful..

beautiful, sad but so beautiful. After I read the last part, I just sat very quietly for a while. Then a friend came in and asked what's up? I just looked at him and started bawling!. He is still trying to figure it out LoL. Great work!

omg! They're dead. *weeps*
Nicely written and very IC.

Oh my god...It's a very rare occasion for me to find a fic that actually makes me cry. This one had me bawling. TT___TT It was so good, too. Very well written and beleivable.