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i was wondering if you were going to be doing a unexpected 3. i love your stories and i really hope to read more of them. thanks your fan Kirie.

awesome story i was wondering if you had a account for fanfiction.net where this story might be at. and again i loved this story alot. ^_^

Have you not posted the third part? :P If you do have it somewhere could you send me a link?

Please update soon do not like cliffeeee. thanks keep up the great work

Hi please update i have read all the chapters i am rereading them.. thanks wonderful how you put everything together..

lmfao XD It's been months since I read the story, and boy am I sorry. Look at all I missed! X3 But now I'm all caught up, and I loved chappie 31 immensely. lol Payback's a bitch, indeed. *lols even more* XD I can't wait for the rest of the honeymoon, and I'm rooting for the rest of the 27th to catch that freak by the time Dee and Ryo get back.

I might not come back to the story for a while (rl getting in the way and such), but rest assured I'll come back eventually. ^w^ *hug* Oh! And I look forward to TUIII! =D

Wow!! I just finished reading all of TU I and what you have posted of TU II. Took me a week but man! This story is AMAZING. I love everything about it...except all the bitches down south and of course the killer. I dont love them lol =D The wedding was crazy with all the detail, geez! dream wedding to the max, i'm jealous lol. JJ and Drake are my favorite little side story, hope there is more about them in later chapters/ TU III. Keep up the great work! I'm excited for the next time you get in an update ^__^

HEY THERE!! remember me?? *Sol_Luna1* I have been following your awesome series and I STILL Love it!! I have been wanting to review but it seems like I always have trouble logging on to be able to post reviews.
I enjoy your story SO MUCH I'm always checking for new chapters. Keep up the great work :)

Yes! An update! I liked this chapter, even though it was kind of a downer. Don't get me wrong! It's exactly what it needs to be, but it makes you feel bad for Dee. Poor baby! If I was him, I probably would have killed someone by now! Well, keep up the great work, and thank you for another awesome chapter!

Admittedly, I started reading this 'cause I was curious as to how a Fake mpreg would work out - I'm a fan of mpreg if it's done well, and I must say, there is so much pure love in this story that I find my belief completely affirmed. I think few writers realize that a good explanation is great, and you have it, but what works even better is when there's so much honest emotion behind the characters that we can't help but fall into it. :) And there's so much in this fic, between all levels of family and friends and things beautiful. There's funny, there's sweet, there's anxiousness. S'great.

And also, even though I started reading it because I love the idea of Dee being pregnant as opposed to Ryo... somewhere, somehow, I've become completely and totally in love with your JJ! HE'S JUST SO TERRIBLY ADORABLE. XD I already loved JJ to pieces as my favorite, but Drake and JJ in this are fascinating since we only get to see glimpses of what's going on in their own troubles. I have to say, I'm dying to know what happened the night of the wedding. *crosses fingers* Drake, dammit, you be good to your partner! Give JJ some love! Rawr.

(Furthermore, thanks to you, I can't get the idea of pregnant JJ out of my head. He'd be so... tiny-pregnant-adorable-crazy. XD Poor Drake. But seriously, pregnant JJ? Could anyone keep their hands off of him? ... WOULD THE PRECINCT SURVIVE? He's a distracting idea. It's not usually my style to hint at things I want to happen - I prefer to let authors take the reigns - but omg, if ever in anything you wrote were JJ to be pregnant, sequels or whatever, Iwouldbeyourslaveforlife.)

So! I'm very much enjoying this, and I admit, I'm stalking your lj in hopes of any future updates. (Not that I don't like your Torchwood stuff, too! <3 So great!) Thanks so much for taking the time and dedication and energy into making this such a wonderful experience for Dee, Ryo, and all the folks we love.