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for The Unexpected II

by FAKEmpregnator

schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First I would like to thank you for your review of my very first story. I am really happy that you liked it, it means alot coming from you!!!*smiles* Okay, now to my review of Dee's party. All I have to say is that I am so mad that I DID NOT GET INVITED *pouts* That to me tops Ryo's hands down. Not that Ryo' was boring by no means is that true but Dee' was far more exciting. I am really glad that you updated so fast, can't wait for the next chap. UNTIL THEN BYE LOVE!!!!!
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see what the new FAKE looks like but I don't no your e-mail to ask of the link to get me there. SO WHAT IS IT???? *cries* me want DEE and RYO!!!!!!
person mls
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved dee's party. can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!
person digianimegirl
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to just say I found it very amusing that Dee seems to be friends with 3/4 of L'Arc~en~Ciel :) Great as always
person Anon
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as always mpregor! And thanks for getting this chapter up so fast it really made my day today. And just wondering, are you a native new yorker? Cause if you aren't then I really feel ashamed of myself since I haven't even heard of some of these places, have heard but never seen some, and the rest I haven't seen in almost 10 years (and no I'm not THAT old. I'm only 21 but I haven't seen coney island since I was like 9 or 10). But anyways keep up the good work. We're looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Have you ever considered using your Carrier concept to write actual books? The depth of your research into the FAKE universe and your incredible verbosity and detail really makes me (1) glad you're willing to produce fanfiction of this quality and (2) that you write AT ALL. I'm so appreciative of your willingness to go into depth with Dee and Ryo's backgrounds that you're creating characters that seem to fit right in! Matoh-san ought to know and approve of this, because I know I certainly do! I love what you've done with Ryo's progression from meek-but-tough to tough! He's become a regular wolf!

...and somehow, Dee is utterly appropriate in his role as pregnant man. I see him being so nurturing to Bicky (in his own way) in the series, and you've just expanded that to its natural conclusion. Thank you so much!

I eagerly await your next chapter in the saga!

WS
person Mazy3261
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Another update! You really had me going with the arrest in the beggining, there. Very tricky! Anyway, I love the update please do it again as soon as you are able!
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GODS, I KNOW I SAID THIS BEFORE SOMEWHERE BUT TO SOMEONE ELSE!!!! BUT HERE I GO AGAIN: GOD I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! LIKE I SAID TO HER I KNOW, I KNOW THATS SO GAY BUT, IT'S TRUE!!!!!! It must be my birthday and I just don't know about it, because both of my favorite stories were updated back to back. This is so good, you always have me hooked from start to finish with every chapter. Oh, and can I know how she did that with the ping pong balls.*laughs* Here's hopeing that Dee gets a chance to see it. His eyes will be buggin out for sure. Can't wait for the next chapter, until then BYE LOVE!!!!*smiles*

person mls
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved this chapter!!!! can't wait to read the next!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I'm STILL trying to get over that stripper! That chapter was awwwwwwsome! And I do sympathize with Dee and the sushi craving, it definately sucks (especially if u start craving at like 1 1/2 to 2 months, it TOTALLY SUCKS!). But I digress, keep up the good stuff. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

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