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for The Unexpected II

by FAKEmpregnator

person shiva45
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is great, I had no net for a while and was glad I could catch up with what I missed. The Army base you put in this chapter brought back memories for me, it was where I was born. It was great seeing a place where I had came from. I did not know anyone had remembered that there was an Army base in Japan. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next installment.
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story I really enjoy it! I've just finished reading bothe the unexpected 1 and 2 and I have to say that I love them both and sorry for not reviewing both of them individually. And I have to say I feel bad now for my ex. Looking at the moodswings that Dee went through in the series I know I was a real *beep* during my pregnancy. Oh well all that aside, looking forward to the next chappie!
person Vic
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More Unexpected II always makes my day brighter. This latest part made me cry, but they were happy tears. Still enjoying the story and I think you're still handling the whole situation superbly. By the by, Vince is the coolest original character ever.
person mls
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved this chapter!!!! can't wait to read the next one!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to see this updated, and you are so welcome, you are a wonderful writer. I am also very happy to see that the wedding plans are going so well, now fingers are crossed that the wedding day will go just as well. Plus, I am so glad that Ryo' family are happy for them and treated Dee with the respect he deserves. Can't wait for chapter 17, until then bye Love!!!

person Sol_Luna1
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED "The Unexpected I" I admit I was hesitating to read about a pregnant man but It just made me Love the Dee/Ryo characters even more.
I became a FAKE fan some years back after getting ahold of the Mangas. I was dissapointed that it ended on book 7. I wrote a lot of little scripts and stories to contuniue it on my own but they were just for me to read. just recently maybe a month ago I was flipping through channels and FAKE the Animie was on! I had totally forgot that there was an Animie and when I did know of it i thought it was just in Japanese. This started me to google trying to find the dvd's from the Animie series. While I was searching, I came upon the FanFiction.net and to my utter joy! a FAKE fanfic commuity! that lead to the Live Journals and AdultFanFiction.net.
I read all 26 chapters of The Unexpected I and just finished all 15 of Unexpected II (Im hooked!) and Im so glad that there are a group of people out there keeping FAKE Dee/Ryo and the characters alive!!

Your stories of Dee and Ryo have kept me ooohing and ahhing so much I cant wait for the Chibi to be born!!, im glad you are extending it though almost going day by day because it just makes it all the more exciting! Looking forward to more of your fabulous saga!! :)

Your New Fan

Sol_Luna1
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GOD I COULD JUST KISS YOU RIGHT KNOW *CHU* I SQUEALED WITH JOY WHEN I SAW THAT THIS WAS UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!! The whole thing with Ted, Marty, Ryo and Dee had me crying I was laughing so much. STORKS *god* my side hurts. Oh, I am also glad that the press conference went so well and hoping that because Dee WAS the one to do this that the people will step up and help put this bastard behind bars or better yet SIX FEET UNDER!!!! Before he has a chance to attack someone else, but more importantly Dee. At first I thought that Elena was the one to ask what they wanted girl or boy? But it wasn't. Happy that nothing went wrong during the time for them to leave, that everything went according to plan. And, the get together with Ryo's grandma Estelle *lets out held breath* it went splended *smiles* Can't wait for chapter 16, till then BYE LOVE
person mls
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!! i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU UPDATE THIS WONDERFUL STORY I AM SO HOOKED AND MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!*gets on hands and knees, and stays there till story is updated*
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update that son-of-a-bitch needs to be caught!!!!!!!!!! DEE' and his baby' life depends on it.

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