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for The Unexpected II

by FAKEmpregnator

person dawnmm
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please-please dont take so long to update again - if i could figure out how to do live journal i would however i am an over 40 mother who just loves to read and your unexpected had me enthralled from the beginning. I do beta if you need (I saw in earlier chapter you did) I have reread unexpected 1 about 4 times already and read 11 almost as many thanks for sharing AND UPDATE SOON!!
person Vic
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEE! I was thrilled to see that you finally updated. I started reading The Unexpected 1 about two weeks ago and am waiting with the traditional baited breath for more of # 2 now! My partner and I both love FAKE and this fic to death, so good luck writing more soon! This is one of the best fan fics I've ever read in any fandom, so you're definately doing something right.
person Kuromei
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And now we're that much closer to the wedding. ^w^ The fluffiness between Dee and Ryo made go go "Awwwww" more than once. ^//w//^ See you at the next chapter! =D *huggles*
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm still enjoying it a lot but I think you're going a bit far with the sappy mush. Even as soon-to-be parents, every other word as 'I love you' is a bit much. Otherwise, it's a great fic and I'm really glad I found it again. Keep it up!
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excuse me but what the heck is taking so long to update the chapter is it being updated somewhere else cause if it is tell me so i can read it come on its taking forever i'm sure u have some time on ur hands left to write the story or is itwrtiers block well i sorry to hear that if it is. Excuse me for being rude but this story is just to good to not be i'm into it like hell man come on update plz
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Come on when are you going to update i'm waiting her dying
person Kuromei
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is fic is so good! I can really fell Dee and Ryo's emotions with them. It made me want to laugh, cry and laugh my ass off some more. You're that good a writer, my friend. I bow to you. *bows*

Now, to fangirl mode: Squee! X3 The wedding's getting closer! XD I can't wait for the next chapter! ^o^
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update if there is anymore to the story cuz i read the first one many times and want to know more so please update
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice its getting really good. Plz update soon and keep up the good work
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol. i really love this story. ya know now that drake and j.j. are together, don't cha think they should get checked out incase one of them is a carrier before knocking each other up? cause then i could see dee and ryo laughing their asses off and chief and the commish sighing and rubbing thier foreheads in pain.

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