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Wow! That was probably the best story I have read. You just made my day, month, year!!!!

That was so hot,....and sick......and inspiring. I hope you don't mind but I'm going to barrow those plant thingy's. I will of course give cedit were credit is due.

Nice finish. All ends happily, and Darien survive another day, and he and Serena may possibly have just made Rini. But that's aside of the point. Well, nicely done, and farewell until your next fic. Laters.

Hey! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. I've really like the last two chapters. The last chapter provided a really good turning point for Darien, in that he was finally domesticated, so to say. His submission is now obvious and understandable, and it's good that you showed the process. I bet Brother was surprised to see the scouts and I'm curious about how they'll handel Darien in the next chapter, considering how he probably has a ton of aphrodisiac still in/on him.

About time. So, nothing left but the wrap up, huh? The girls don't get to "play" with the vines at all? Ah well, spilt milk. Looking forward to what I presume is the finale. Laters.

I don't suppose the twins are ever going to capture any of the girls, by any chance? It would be nice to see some positive forward motion about now for our unfortunate hero. Well, whatever. Laters.

Wow, this was another great chapter, and so much good stuff happened. I really like the descripion of the grandfather vine, the "soup" Darien drinks and the the punishment at the end. Your writing style is really clear and flows nicely. I'm also impressed with how quickly you updated.

This is pretty hot and interesting and I'm looking forward to more updates and maybe the scouts showing up later too :)