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This is excellent. A lot of Ash/Misty smutfics are godawful, it's rare to find one that puts so much care and effort into the characters rather than "i love you i love you too let's have hot underage sex". (Sorry if I sound elitist, but I've got some BAAAD memories of the Pokemon fandom...)

I absolutely loved this fic. There aren't a whole lot of well written Ash/Misty adult fanfics so it was great to see this one. I've read it about three times so far. I would love to see you write another Ash/Misty fic. Maybe one that deals with them admitting their feelings to one another and/or their first time together. Hope to see another fic from you soon. Keep up the excellent writing.

Krissy :-)

To not review such a passionate yet erotic AshxMisty fict would forever torture my soul. Not! Well, about the torture my soul, actually it would...? But this was really well written and not because it's long though it looked like you did double space, or triple, or quadruple? That doesn't matter. I'm a fan of the old traditional pairing and yuri.

It's amazing how one can take a normal scene and turn it into something as full blown yet hot as this!

-Wolfe Chaotic

Nicely Written. ;)