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for In The Navy

by Jakka

person cagna4
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think that whatever had made that person go looking for smoker is going to wish they were in the grand line without a log pose or a weapon.
person thedcg
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A fun read- and much better than your summary makes it out to be. Although I should probably stop judging fiction by it's summaries, and actually give it a click. ;)
I thought Tashigi was a little too... passive/weak. Trauma? Whatever- she seems a woman of strength, to much so to be so bassive. /shrug
Didn't stop me from enjoying it, though! Keep up the good work!
person Lyfe
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's rare to find a lemon with TashigixSmoker (which I would find awkward since Smoker considers her like a daughter and the two have a father/daughter kind of relationship) but it's rare enough to find a lemon with Tashigi in it!

Really, update and get that ZoroxTashigi one out! I've never read a lemon about those two and some of the fics I read indicate there will be but never get there. The poor authors either have writer's block or have completely forgotten about the fic itself. So, as a reviewer and a ZoroxTashigi fan, I'm begging you, UPDATE!
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aughh!! Unresolved sexual tension! That was CRUEL!! XD
This is probably the ONLY Tashigi fic on this site, and God I love that girl, shes cute as a button and hard as a nail. THANK YOU for understanding the need for more het fics, I had almost given up hope. (I'd write one myself, but I'm just so shy.. ^^;)
I'll keep an eye on this, I hope you update frequently! I'm just loving this, not only because its sexy and, like, not gay, but also because of how well written it is. Shivers!
(as a thought, though, you don't always have to use the character's names... sometimes just "he" would suffice ^^;)

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