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by PhoenixWolf

schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello, i just wanted to let you know i really like your story 'sleep sweet'. I have one in the works for Loki Ragnarok, the first chapter is posted at the moment but its nothing to exciting at the moment. Well, i would like to know what happens next here so keep it going if you can.
person abelton
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it really like it so sweet and nice it maybe not a lemon but it is still good.(^_^)
person dawnmm
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i find that i enjoy sweet i hope that you keep writing this has been very relaxing reading your work
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your work is good. I did notice that you do have a few redundancies. "Kyo shrugged his shoulders" is not necessary. "Kyo Shrugged" is fine. There are a few more through out the story. If you go back through and reread your story, pull out the redundant statements, it will make your piece more concise and easier to read.
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg that was soooooooooo cute!! i mean seriously cute!
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you should keep going with the story... it's cute but i want more! Not to mention there arn't really any people who write fruits basket.... please please please!!!! I would love you forever an ever! *gives cookies and cakes and anything else and pouts* prease!?

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