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Another great update though I wonder if Keitaro will knock her up?

Very beauitfuly done. He has fallen in love with her, yet when he try to tell here, he see that it is not possble. I thought that Keitaro was going to try and date Motoko as that would have been the only way that he would be able to stay close to Chiharu. Maybe that will happen, maybe it won't, who knows but only you. Anyway hope to read more soon.

That effing ruled man. I`m a big admirer of your work so do you fancy swapping ideas or giving pointers? I want to do a lemon myself and I just feel I need some advice yah? Thanks

Love this fic, hoping for an upadte for sometime now, I really have to wonder what is going to happen to Kei. Will he find joy with the odler women or heartache. Hope for more soon.

very nice.... more?????

Another top quality lemon! im looking forward to where your going to go with this.

Great story Hawker! Operation: Keitaro Nails the Aoyama Women complete lol I was expecting Mo/Kei, but you surprised me with this one. I really like Chiharu's character. Even though she's an OC, she fits perfectly. Good job, and keep this one coming :)

very good stuff. id say your quality of 'hawtness' doesnt even neeed to improve its already great and any further improvement will turn all readers into mindless slaves >.< look forward to your next story or a continuation of this 1!

Very readable and interesting so far. I was honestly surprised at the pairing, I thought for certain it was going to be about Motoko. That's not a bad thing though, as the Keitaro/Motoko pairing is overdone at this point. I hope you will continue this.

A lot of your stories involve Keitaro with an older woman, so I wasn't really suprised by the pairing (you're losing your edge ^w^). Anyways this is pretty good, however it lacked a lot of the tension that was presented in your previous stories so it is not my favorite by far. I'm hoping for something similair to Blizzard in your next installment of the "Let Keitaro Get Some" saga of yours.

Also if you could...return to the Evangelion section and give us another gem...Nightshift is getting a little too weird for me (grasping at pairings comes to mind) and I am in the mood for something fresh, and yet still traditional (I like your OC's better).

Anyways thanks for the good fic, and I hope you continue to make more.