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Keitaro definately didn't seem to resist all that much when Chiharu jumped him... The spark of chemistry Chiharu spoke of must work both ways, although it wasn't particularly apparent despite the story mostly being in Keitaro's perspective...

Anyways, awesome work as usual! I love how many of your stories leave Keitaro emotionally fucked over... The slight "disturbing" factor is something that's characterized your work in the last year, and prove have much more original content than the standard fare. Please keep it up!

Nice job on the beginning of this story, I look forward to more chapters

I must say, most excellent story, if a bit of a disappointment. I was kind of hoping Keitaro and Motoko would "do the dirty deed" but still very enjoyable. Keep up the good work.

Very interesting. It's got a lot of potential for a great fic. The results of the last fight were a bit unclear, but I'm leaning towards the fact that they lost. Correct me if I'm wrong. The fic does a seem similar to Ships in the Night. Now weather that was intentional or not, I'm not sure, but the two do seem to have a lot of similarities in them. Anyway, with that said and done, I can't wait for the next chapter to be up. Hope it's up soon.

Farezzz

Damn thats a nice fic waiting some update congrats!!

Hawker Its Very Well Written But the Affair With Chiharu is Confusing. Are you Trying to Kill keitaro?

a continuation of this fic would be most appreciated..can't wait to know what happen next..

Again, a great story...I love the new couples you come up with. Congrats on another bonafide great fic. But, if you don't mind and I make a request. Could you do a fic with Kitsune and Keitaro? I've never seen one of those...

Thanks and congrats,
Fenrir

Hawker,

Good work, as always. Quick, dirty (but sweet), and as always you leave the reader with just enough to think about, and a lot to read into the future in the perverted continuities you create.

Though, I must confess, this is not as good as "Face In The Mirror," which I believe time will prove me correct in considering that piece one of the very best Love Hina fanfiction works.