rate_review Reviews

tHIS WAS A GREAT STORY.. ITS A SHAME ITS OVER...NYAH... I LOVED IT!!! IS THERE HOPE FOR A SEQUEL? WE NEED MORE GOOD WATAXSHIZU STORIES...NYAH!!! i LOVED IT SO MUCH!!! I READ IT AT ONE GO!!! >.<

First off, I thought your story was very compelling. The only problem I found was sometimes it was a bit difficult to tell whose point of view it was or who was talking...there didn't seem to be any clear break when switching between the characters. I was confused a couple of times, however I couldn't stop reading it! Thanks for the story!

This story is really good, I am glad I took the time to read it and thank-you for taking the time to write and post it. I am looking forward to reading another chapter thank-you again.