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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful job showing the progression of time and their relationship. You've really kept them in character. kudos.
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was soooo cute!
You did very well in explaining their relationship growth and oh god! Soubi was so sexy
You did very well in explaining their relationship growth and oh god! Soubi was so sexy
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March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. i really loved it.
hot and emotional at the same time.
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terrific job.
hot and emotional at the same time.
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terrific job.
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soubi's masochism made me laugh... But it was a sweet story, in some ways. Anyways, yeah, it was really good. :) Thanks for writing!
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwsoooooooooooooooooome awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwsoooooooooooooooooome............I LOVED IT, IT WAS SOOOOOOO KAWAII!!!
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_O you really got this down! ritsuka's reactions to it all were amazing, i really loved when he caught soubi masterbating! soubi's fear was so funny. (i've got a sick sense of humor.)
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg... that was really sweet and at the same time, REALLY hot. One of the best Loveless fics I've read. I really hope you decide to write more.
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was great. I'm in love with this story. You're an amazing writer<3
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
god i hate you that was perfect!!!!!!!!!!! damn it wouldve been shorter if u wouldve left him 13 but that would be weird i guess, to u i mean, it seemed like it
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
personally i thought the ending was way to fluffy