rate_review Reviews

This was really wonderful! I loved reading it. I loved that the focus was on the eventual lemon but that at the same time it wasn't...I guess a more articulate way to say that would be that I loved your foreshadowing technique. I knew from the very beginning what Soubi really wanted, and yet I knew Soubi was fine without it at the same time. This was a very refreshing read, especially for AFF. So many of the fics over here are about Ritsuka losing his ears, which would be fine except that a lot of them are done so artlessly. I loved yours.

(I've read your Naruto stories as well, and I really like those, too. Love your style! :D)

I enjoyed this every much. It stands alone very well. It's complete and everything you need is right there for a satisfying read. Thank you!

Very good job! ^_^

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Great oneshot! I really liked it! Great wording and great plot, along with great smut

Cheers
Crmy