rate_review Reviews

I really like this fanfiction... Interesting plot so far, and you write all characters very well. The two things I liked most were Aya-chan (she´s really wonderful! no one deals better with Ran than her^^) and poor, poor Schuldig... I so had to laugh when Braddy told him that he couldn´t have sex for quite a time...
Hm, but I´m really excited to read the next chapter! I wonder what Yohji´s power/ability will be, and if the other Weiss members will have such a special power, too... so please, please continue!
Oh, and by the way, why is German so popular? Almost everytime I read a fanfiction with a new organisation/assassin team it has a German name... Not that this is bad, it just makes me wonder^^

must...read...MORE!!! Gasp!! (splutter,cough). ok, yeah. i've been waiting with bait breath for the next chapters. there are not too many good writers out there, so i wait patiently.

*stares* Yohji's... POWERS? O.O Ooooh sweet god you are evil! And I want to read more so badly either way and now... Whaaaa!

Could it be he's some kind of soccubus? Like someone who can make others to have sex with him? But that wouldn't be THAT useful because Ran definately wouldn't want him to seduce anyone but himself... And not even that if Yohji can help it... I can't see Ran being happy with being reduced to a wanting puddle of need and lust every time he sees his lover...

Anyway, awesome, and can't wait for more!

Awww. Poor Schuldig. I hope Crawford holds him at night so that he can sleep.

That was so... Sweet, I can't give it another name. The way you write them, caring so deeply fo eachother yet never taking anything for granted, Yohji and Ran are so incredibly sweet... It really gave me a warm feeling inside, so to say. As for poor poor Shu. Well just that; Poor, poor Shu XD (and poor, poooooooor us for not getting any lemon with those two in the near future ;))

wow that was an awsome chatper ... please update soon i would love to read more later for now

angel

yay!!! u didn't die!!!! ^_^
i was hoping this story hadn't been abandoned. ^_^

they probably won't fix it cause they saw all those perversions u've got the first time around. ^_~

Gods but I know about messed up laptop constuctions... Last time, mine was gone for all of three fucking months... Heads up and I'm looking forwarth to the updates!

wow that was awsome .. who is after them ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

Well, you have certainly caught my attention and the grammar and spelling were great. It's such a relief to read something not riddled with typos. Crawford being sternly loving with Schu always makes my day. Write on, I'll be watching for it.