rate_review Reviews

Just to say... your story is fantastic... i thoroughly enjoy it. However... I am so confused as to who everyone is! Think you could make up a little family tree or something for me? I'd appreciate it! Keep up the good work... such a good story!

My poor baby. Abel can hide inside *smack, cough cough* behind my skirt any day. Boy, Cain wouldn't be half bad if he were just given a ball gag.... Hmmm... Can't find Francesco, huh? DAMN! HOW UNFORTUNATE! *ahem* I'm in a mean mood. Thinking about Abel in distress made me want to cry, but I suppose I'm still a little rough around the edges yet. Loved the chapter, especially Gun's confidence. Hot damn that's hot. Thank you so very much for the well wishes. I know the old man's better because every five minutes he was asking me to retrieve some simple thing for him, and he was playing with the cats all day. Lazy bum. I told him to get back to work and he asked for a soda. I brought him a water. You go and take ALL the credit for YnM and I will bow to you as you do. Yoko needs to write another volume NOW. *sighs* My mary-sue-syndrome is running rampant. I went back and re-read the story I started. I think I want to beat myself it's such a screaming raging mary sue! it's awful, so it'll never go up, but wishful thinking is ok, right? right? :-/ Can't wait for the next chapter and thanks again for the well wishes. Maybe I should just email you next time instead of totally invading your review section >.<

hmmm Alessandro learning to fight...not sure i could see it. but perhaps he'll surprise us all, curious to find out.

uh oh Francesco missing...

Glad Gun's willing to hold Abel back as he stands up to Cain. *snorts* Yeah, one of the 'paths definately needs to walk through Abel's head just to get everything straightened out in there.

Poor Alessandro. He's not cut out to be a warrior but he hates to see his people die. *grins* Can you just see him and Seth sparring?

Well, first I wanted to say thank you very much for your review. I wish that AFF.Net had a reply system that could be done. But, alas, they do not, so I wanted to come over here and give you my sincere thanks. And to answer you about the dragon, yes, she's got a more human form that she takes on.
Now, to more relevant things. A review for you, especially since well, this is your fiction and the review section for your fiction. XDD I've only had the time to read the first two chapters, but from what I've read, I really like it, it's off to a great start, I can't wait to read more! And the second I get the chance, I absolutely will. And, do expect a more elaborate and constructive review the second I can do it. I try to make my reviews worthwhile. XDD; And I'm afraid that this one isn't but...oh well, I'm trying here. XD

you're right. I *do* wanna hang Cain by his entrails and invite some ants to come play in them. Preferably fire ants.

*cuddles Abel and patpats* Poor baby. take it out on dietrich and Isaak. Man... I felt so bad for Abel that I had to write a six page sex scene, just to reward him for being such a trooper ;) Loved the chapter, as always. I really love it when Tres walks up at the perfect moment and does these little possessive things to show everyone that Taka is his. *sighs* real men... what a novelty. Oh, and my fiance swears that he saw a 12th volume to YnM? Everywhere I look says there's only 11.

yes question answered lol. curious to find out what Cain actually plans on using her for. like poor Abel's life needs to be anymore miserable *sniff* hopefully eventually it will get better.

wow. Cain is really fantastically sick. Sorry about the late review, but my comp is on the fritz. Very intriguing chapter. So, is weib kreuz the same as weiss kreuz? I looked it up on wikipedia and couldn't find anything under weiss, but I found something under weib. At any rate, very intriguing chapter. Looking forward to the next.

Damn it.... I hate it when I'm right...

*snickers* an that explains why I didn't recognize Schuldig earlier... little brat went and changed his name on me. *grins*

Still enjoying this even if I want to see how well Cain can function with his intestines tied around his neck.