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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and don't be sorry! Sexual frustration keeps your readers on their toes! A true smut story wouldn't be decent if there wasn't SOME tension. Write what comes to you when it comes to you! But you shouldn't worry about it. It seems to come quite naturally and beautifully! ;)
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just mean cause you made me fall for another anime boy I can't have ;) excellent portrayal of the club. Forms a lot of questions in my head that have nothing to do with the story! lol Waiting for your esther punishment, it's sure to be amusing. I must say I like esther in the manga MUCH better! She doesn't snivel nearly as much! She was straight about to get gang raped in vol 2 and she fucking punches the biggest dude right between the eyes! Fabulous. Anyhoo, excellent job as always! anxiously awaiting your next update
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*howls* Esther talked *Ion* into going to the club didn't she? Oh lord, I can't wait to see that one.
ANd *thank you* for making Alessandro slowly grow a backbone! Especially with an open mind!
ANd *thank you* for making Alessandro slowly grow a backbone! Especially with an open mind!
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter, curious to know how it progresses.
poor Alessandro. he's so cute! i just want to hug him! interested to find out how he handles things around there.
i hate Esther, she so annoying and whiney.
poor Alessandro. he's so cute! i just want to hug him! interested to find out how he handles things around there.
i hate Esther, she so annoying and whiney.
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
K, so i haven't reviewed this yet, but i have been reading... and while i had been confused for quite sometime as to all the characters I have come to a conclusion on your story... FABULOUS! I really like the way you've depicted Tres! Oh my... so very good! Excellent story my dear, keep it up I look forward to the next chapter!
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*howls* Beautiful! Love the interaction between them. Especially getting ready for the club.
Now what about Abel?
Now what about Abel?
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*whines and kidnaps Tres* mmmMmMmMMmMmmm...seductive hotbot. and don't worry about the dancing thing. seems we have a lot of ideas in common and I would never truly think one of my ideas so very unique that no one else would have ever thought of it. *whines and stares at th 'droid* You're so mean!
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March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was an interesting chappie. i'm all interested in finding out what else Tres is like now! ^_^ looking forward to them being in the club. should be fun.
definitely can't wait to find out what's in store for Abel. suspense! suspense!!
definitely can't wait to find out what's in store for Abel. suspense! suspense!!
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March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"The created aren’t really one or another of any particular species. We’re a combination of all different kinds of people and circumstances." - This is a fascinating idea.
Looking forward to the ritual. I confess I hope it involves Isaak and Dietrich being victims again. I love it when you're evil to them, too.
Looking forward to the ritual. I confess I hope it involves Isaak and Dietrich being victims again. I love it when you're evil to them, too.
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're making me fall head over heels for Tres. and I'm REALLY enjoying the idea of two husbands, both of which being tatsumi and watari. Mmmmm....... *drools* anyways! I can't wait to see Tres's bondage gear!!!!! and wow, the sexual undercurrents in this family are kinda crazy. I think I'd have died of embarassment a long time ago. ;)