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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story sucks balls
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was okay i guess.
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!
You got me curious at first at who the guy was. I was hoping that it would be Seiya not Mamoru... you have no clue how happy I was to find out that it is Seiya that Usagi is getting frisky with! I think you did a good job, especially if it's your first time writing something echi... The story is done nicely, it was sweet and innocent, and I can picture each scene in my head. Also I thought you did a good job of writing a story of this nature without getting too dirty or nasty, it is pretty echi, but you were able to maintain the character's innocent and not make them look too slutty... anyways, I hope to read more echi stuff from you!
You got me curious at first at who the guy was. I was hoping that it would be Seiya not Mamoru... you have no clue how happy I was to find out that it is Seiya that Usagi is getting frisky with! I think you did a good job, especially if it's your first time writing something echi... The story is done nicely, it was sweet and innocent, and I can picture each scene in my head. Also I thought you did a good job of writing a story of this nature without getting too dirty or nasty, it is pretty echi, but you were able to maintain the character's innocent and not make them look too slutty... anyways, I hope to read more echi stuff from you!
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but, Seiya?! I take it you don't like Mamoru, huh? Oh, well...
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February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it ^_~ keep writting...... this story is awesome