rate_review Reviews

This is utter garbage. I have seen some truly rotten fanfics before but this ranks near the top as one of the absolute worst. It's like looking at a pile of vomit.

so many mistakes, so little time to count them...in my opioin, the story could've been a lot better if you had corrected the mistakes.

I read your 'Outer Treatment' story recently and it's really hot! My favourite segment is the tentacle rape and impregnation, but the other stuff is cool too, particularly the mention of Michiru Kaitou being raped for hours *after* she passed out. Haven't really much more to add to that except to say that given it is not your native language, you still write better quality English than 90% of the English fanfiction writers.

Keep up the good work!