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February 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Amazing writing! Kyon's sarcastic first person perspective was spot on! I felt like I was reading a chapter directly from a Haruhi Suzumiya novel. The Kyon/Koizumi and Koizumi/Kyon role reversal was really well woven into the story as well. Highly recommend!!!
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The beginning was just a bit confusing, but sure, that's what made the whole story so dang funny. I love the style of your writing, especially with Kyon's perfect personality (what with talking to himself, my favorite part of it ha).
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah please! Write a continuation!
Because Kyon said, that he will show Koizumi how fast he learn XDD
I like the imagination, that Koizumi is the uke ^-^
And I really liked your writing. Kyon's thoughts are really realistic (like in the novels!)
Because Kyon said, that he will show Koizumi how fast he learn XDD
I like the imagination, that Koizumi is the uke ^-^
And I really liked your writing. Kyon's thoughts are really realistic (like in the novels!)
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It really reads like an episode from the series! Kyon's inner voice is so chatty and his inner turmoil is so amusing!
You really captured his character and put it into well chosen words! I am highly entertained.
You really captured his character and put it into well chosen words! I am highly entertained.
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally, a yaoi fic for Suzumura Haruhi! It was very much excellently written and kept true to the series' narrative style: Kyon POV, the non-linear placement of events and I can very much imagine Haruhi actually thinking to do doujinshi to try and achieve fame. Thank you! Thoroughly enjoyed Koizumi x Kyon.