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Sorry, I was busy making videos. But yes, I'd like to see more.

Although it took me a few minutes to recall where the story last left off, I was able to quickly get it together and dive back into the new chapter. I must say its curious, though somewhat short. What would the diamond/map lead to, perhaps the other Arceus Plates locations? Its good to see some of the other Team Genesis characters are getting their time in the lime-light as well this chapter.

In response to the side note: I find it deliciously ironic that I forgot about my character winning in the pokemon league here! Considering the way things are going, I'd ask that Alex join up with Vi and Max, even if it is briefly, to help deal with the Team Genesis threat. Off-screen investigating, so to speak if it would take up too much time to have him with them for too long.

Good update, and I'm glad to hear updates could be coming more regularly! I'll see ya next time~ Ulforce.

Well, thats a surprising twist: The evil bastards are trying to save the world? Oy. I wouldn't have expected that in a thousand years. Nice plot twist.

I also have to take back something I said last time, about cutting chapters short to keep going. I have to agree with Nevyn. If it takes you a year, but the chapters are well written and such, then please, take the time you require to write them.

We don't always have alot of time to do the things we want, but rushing what we do enjoy simply to keep it going isn't the right way to go about things... Pretty much keep going at your own pace, and don't worry about update speeds DarkMaiden.

It was some nice character devolopment from Jack this latest update, the same can be said of Damien. Again, good plot twist, completly unexpected.

So: Good work, DarkMaiden, lookin' forward to your next update, be it a month or three from now. And before I head out, Happy Thanksgiving to you! ~Ulforce.

I for one absolutely adore this story and really think you should finish it. Perhaps if you decreased the pace you write at, maybe took some time off from writing occasionally, you would feel refreshed enough to continue the story as you originally planned as i for one would be more than willing to wait.

Either way, even if you stopped right now it would still be one of my favourite AFF fics ever. I just feel it deserves a proper ending even if it takes a year or two.

I understand, I'll be here rooting for ya DM. I can wait as long as I have to so no need to rush. And if you're getting hate mail block and delete it. If people have enough time to talk shit to you then they should be doing other things with thier lives and not talking shit to other people.

Anyway, I hope you have a good weekend DM. See you whenever you get a chance. ^_^

Thanks everyone**

"What I do ask of you, however, is to post a message – it doesn’t need to be more than a few lines – just so we know you haven’t given up on the story."

I decided not to give up for now, let's see how it all works out. I need to re-edit the second part of the current chapter but hopefully the update wont take more than a couple of days.

DarkMaiden, you have done a wonderful job with this story since you began it. I'm glad that you won't be giving up on the story and instead are willing to use the time-skip path for it instead.

I'm sure the next chapter and those following will be fine, so don't worry and write when you have the time. Sometimes breaks are needed, sometimes there just isn't time to write things out to full detail.

Do what you have to to keep writing and enjoy it at the same time. I've got faith in you, DarkMaiden, good luck with the new chapters! 'Till next time~Ulforce.

Sorry I havn't commented in awhile. I just suck with reviewing even after I've read it. I'll be here waiting for the next one patiently. ^_^

Okay, good progress here.

From what I understood, they have copys of the Arceus plates? And they are looking for the real deals for some reason, presumedly to make themselves more powerful?

Noah and Jacks relationship is improving, but will that fall apart after Noah recovers?
And what is Damien going to do with Jack? I doubt it will be pleasant.

Interesting bit at the topic about Dimensions, worlds and universes etc, DarkMaiden. The four lines in bold fit together nicely.

I'm very surprised you threw Vi into the Pokemon Mystery Dungeon dimension/universe, though. As a shiny pink Furret no less. Haha!

I like the Lucario and the name Vi gives him, Luken. Pretty cool to have him be shiny with the piercings too.

I'm rather looking forward to seeing how this turns out! Good update, DarkMaiden.