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sorry >.<" I'm not much of a stratagist. I'm more a Flybytheseatofmypantsagist or the kind to pay attention to there types during not before. I'm so excited though! It's been awsome so far.

Hmm, the last part of my comment didn't post. Um yeah, sorry! I'm not much a strategist more like a flybytheseatofmypantsegist. Heh. But I'm excited for what you have in store for the purple division!

You guys from the Purple Division seem to be very nervous about being the last ones.

First of all I want to congratulate the three of you for your strategies, if you weren't in the same Division you all would probably ended up winning the Golden Medal.
But unfortunatly you ARE in the same one, which is a pain in the ass for me having to chose a winner.
The Orange Division was giving me some trouble but now it's almost finished, so I ask you guys to give me some time to think better about your Division, it's the only one that is actually giving me doubts about who should be in the 1º, 2º and 3º positions.

I'll try not to take long ^_^

*Pulls out the almighty Zodiac spear*
Uniforce, if you touch DarkMaiden your a dead man. I'll make sure of that personally.

*Lowers Head* Ok ok all players in the Green/Red/Purple/Orange Divisions are allowed to kick my ass =P

It's almost 4 am in here and I think it's best for all if I finish this chapter after having a good night sleep, my creativity is pretty much next to 0% by now. It WILL be finished as soon as I wake up.

If someone in the Blue or Yellow divisions doesn't like something just say so, but remember it's hard to synch all the strategies that I received with each other =3

take your time DM there's no need to rush honestly. take all the time you need...like i am XD (trying to make all my thoughts come together before i make the second chapter in my story)

I know she saw him in that round =P Later on in this chapter she feels ashamed for not remembering who he was from the start =3

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Ok there has been some confusion with some emails so I couldn't do it this weekend, I wasn't gonna start without most of the contestants.
But since I'm gonna have a few free days this week I promise it will be posted by Wednesday (or Thursday tops). If by Friday it's not posted you can hit me in the head all you want =S

That took long...seriously long...i was begining to think you abandoned the story....good chapter though...but there were still a few mistakes.Such as

"Almost every person that {sinned} up for the Pokemon League had joined the party"

Sinned or Signed...

But then you just recovered from....whatever you had...so I cant really say much...

On the next table was Mark hanging out with Emma, apparently they were discussing the subject of evolution, Steven was alone on another table next to them pretending not to listen to their conversation, it was obviously interesting him but he wasn’t really the social type of guy.

Oh my fucking god...that sums up Steven almost perfectly. XD

Oh fuck yes! I fianlly got my name back with the capitol letter in it! V FOR VICTORY!!!