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Hi there, you guys are completely correct, but the truth is that it wasn't "fully" a mistake =P This chapter is very different from the others not just because it's the League, but because I'm working with characters that don't belong to me, with my characters I can do whatever I want with them, but with characters that were kindly given to me by readers I can't steal their spotlight for storyline or defeat them just because of Type or Level Advantage. In Vi's battle her adversary was a Bug specialist, and that gave me a tiny headache cause Vi's party pokemon ALL had advantage against them, I would never go "Flawless Victory" on anyone because I kinda agree with the anime version of the battles where they sometimes ignore Type and use strategy, so most times when I say "didn't have advantage" it means they were equally strong. The Ice/Ground I really didn't know, you can shoot me for that one LOL. I'll try to edit those battles soon and improve them.

Don't worry about the Green Division it will have a bit of storyline, but the Yellow Division will be pretty much just battles again =P Half of the players are eliminated in this chapter so I need to put the spotlight on all of them now. I promise the next chapters won't be like this. Thanks for being such faithful readers ^_~ and I'm working on the Green Division currently but I've been having a busy life lately. (Also don’t worry about correcting stuff I like that lol) Until next time ****

update please

I want to add another pokemon in my team, its used only for mission (ninja missions I get) and battle if needed, Ditto level 70, also I use it to....well have sex with a girl

...why must you shoot me...

I won! *does a little happy dance*
My god, if I'm willing to get up at some ungodly hour (6 AM my time), to go see if you wrote anything new, that ought to be a compliment :P I like my sleep!

'nyways, I'm glad to see you're alive, and the matches were great! Keep up the good work, yo!

~Yuu-chan

...Chris won?...uh..THANK YOU! Although I wish you would of used the first pair*sniffle*..not that I'm complaining at all*Sees The Critic trying to get up and shoots him again* Even?...crap I missed...

well my Blazikin knows, Flame kick and Flame thrower but he uses hand signs before using it to make it stronger, Shadow claws, and Rock Slide

Glad to see that I did well...anyway I hope I get to face Vi

MY Alakazam is named Silver you know, Shedninja is Shino (from naruto and I like Jack using Sanji for tenacruel because I like one piece) and Blazikin is named Hot Shot, Alakazam was my first pokemon...also she is a girl HEHEHEHEHE so you can put in a sex joke if you want

I STILL HATE THIS