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for Hoenn Harem *Author's Note*

by DarkMaiden

person Grim
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter!

Woooo I made it to the next round. So excited :3 ehehehe. If you need anymore info about my person let me know. :D
person xpkmnx
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
was zane my character?
cause i dont remember having 2 dragons for him
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry my bad, when I saw "Gastrodon" I thought it was a "Garchomp" (I never had that pokemon). But that's why It says "Editing-Don't read now", because i'm still reading everything to see if it's all correct =P

Just finished correcting the party pokemons on the trainers, I only found two with mistakes, sorry you were one of them =P But 2 out of 36 isn't all that bad LoL.
person xain34
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh snap steven made it. oh mabye you could make a side thing where jack asks how he got the regi's and steven would say something about trying to catch regegigas but failing obviously (regigigas is a mean little basterd)
person xain34
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh shit i forgot i have to remove alakazam and golem instead replace them with lucario (female) and spiritomb (female) (i forgot because my acctuall alakazam and golem are to strong and besides i didnt have the diamond game at the time so im switching off golem and alakazam if you want to you dont really have to though would be greatly apreciated though ^.^;)
person JynX87
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude you kicked Keira out ALREADY?? I did say I prefered to have her disqualified than losing, but on the second round?? Oh well, she fought well and she scorched Jack...COOL.
I loved the League so far, I wish the games were like this, I still don't even know how I was able to beat the Pearl Elite Four so fucking easily, I mean come on none of my pokemons were even level 60 yet..
Can't wait to see the next round, I wont be IN it, but I guess my character is still gonna show up.
Awsome Job, keep going!
person Yuutousei
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*does a little happy dance*

Yay! I won my match!

Great job writing the battle for Jack! It's a wonder than Ash in the anime doesn't get any extra prizes for constantly getting fried by his pokemon XD

I can't wait for the next set of battles! Have a great day,

Yuu-chan
person Lord of Steel
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK my work ethics kicked in so i'll finish my description
person Lord of steel
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
actually screw it just e-mail me if you want more info, i'm too lazy
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooo, that sounds like fun, lol. I hope that you update this soon cuz its a good story!

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