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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Humm...I was afraid that might happen, if the other chapters were episodes this saga would be a side movie...so it's obviously "removable". If I get a few more negative reviews I'll remove it and slightly change the storyline to make chapter 5 into chapter 4.
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looks good on my end DM. Keep up the good work, as usual i'll be reading it. ^_^
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm back, but unfortunatly without updates yet =P
Thanks for all reviews, I'd be lost without them lol
I changed the Jessie mistake, from now on I'll go to Bulbapedia before making cameos. There are lots of things I want to change in this chapter and in previous ones but I'll edit everything after the next chapter is published, which will take time...long live procrastination! I'm joking.
But really, go enjoy the rest of the summer vacations 'cause chapter four will take a while to write.
Until then, Bye ***
Thanks for all reviews, I'd be lost without them lol
I changed the Jessie mistake, from now on I'll go to Bulbapedia before making cameos. There are lots of things I want to change in this chapter and in previous ones but I'll edit everything after the next chapter is published, which will take time...long live procrastination! I'm joking.
But really, go enjoy the rest of the summer vacations 'cause chapter four will take a while to write.
Until then, Bye ***
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Left arm DM. O_o;
Just helping.
Just helping.
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Take your time DM, there's no need to rush. ^_^
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to apologize for the delay in posting the 3rd Chapter it has been giving me a lot of trouble, to make it work I had to change it a few times and I am now re-doing it again. Chapters with entrances from outside characters are always harder.
It'll probably be up this weekend.
Until then ***
It'll probably be up this weekend.
Until then ***
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'Ello! Great story! I just wanted to ask if it was ok if I made a refrence to some of your characters in my up-and-comming story? They wont actually make any appearances, but some of my oc's may make some refrences to your characters. Is that ok?
Sure, as long as they don't offend them or something like that it's fine with me =P
Sure, as long as they don't offend them or something like that it's fine with me =P
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yea, what's in the next chapter? Also, you still have the data I sent to you about the changes in my character right?
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodluck on your final projest DM, and I hope to see more from you. Also, even though i'm not doing the story right now doesn't mean I have given up on it. O_o;
I'm just being lazy. -_-;
I'm just being lazy. -_-;
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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First let me start by thanking everyone for every review up until now, without them I wouldn't have evolved anything since the first chapter. Now into the answering part =P
Yeah I figured it might be too long, ever since the League I've been troubled about the size of chapters, I went from extremely small, to medium and gigantic, so now on a new season how should they be? I guess I'll make a 20 pages limit to simplify things.
"(...)As for the Golden Badges; it sounds rather dishonourable, not using your full power. This way loads of trainers can get their hands on badges they don’t deserve in the first place. If they can’t defeat the gym leader, they are unworthy of getting the badge and will simply have to get stronger and come back a second time. (...)"
Believe it or not, I fully agree with you, but the truth is that I had the sad idea of making the Gym Battles on Season 1 just like in the games instead of how I figured they should be. And now it's too late to fully correct that.
I bloody hate the fact that in the games your character goes from zero to hero in what months/weeks? And Gym Leaders that battle every single day for years are fucking weak, I don't think I ever had to even train before defeating one.
The easiest answer would be to simply make them way stronger from the start, but for some weird reason I didn't do that. So the Golden Badges are my theory for making the original version make some bloody sense, otherwise now I would have to force Vi and other characters to start from zero every time they change regions (like they do in the anime) or make them humiliate every Gym Leader in Sinnoh.
But don't get me wrong I do like my GB Theory "Giving your best isn't fighting with the best weapons, it's putting every part of your naked being into battle." - one of my fav quotes.
Max...really watching him in the anime gives a different perspective to what he might be, but that's based on personal opinion obviously. That kid would die without a Pokenav, I don't see him as book worm, but I think he's the type of guy that spends more time studying then trying things out. But yeah I forget he's old now, I'm not gonna detail his age but I'm imagining him with 24 give or take, not a kid anymore gotta change that.
Bye for now**
Yeah I figured it might be too long, ever since the League I've been troubled about the size of chapters, I went from extremely small, to medium and gigantic, so now on a new season how should they be? I guess I'll make a 20 pages limit to simplify things.
"(...)As for the Golden Badges; it sounds rather dishonourable, not using your full power. This way loads of trainers can get their hands on badges they don’t deserve in the first place. If they can’t defeat the gym leader, they are unworthy of getting the badge and will simply have to get stronger and come back a second time. (...)"
Believe it or not, I fully agree with you, but the truth is that I had the sad idea of making the Gym Battles on Season 1 just like in the games instead of how I figured they should be. And now it's too late to fully correct that.
I bloody hate the fact that in the games your character goes from zero to hero in what months/weeks? And Gym Leaders that battle every single day for years are fucking weak, I don't think I ever had to even train before defeating one.
The easiest answer would be to simply make them way stronger from the start, but for some weird reason I didn't do that. So the Golden Badges are my theory for making the original version make some bloody sense, otherwise now I would have to force Vi and other characters to start from zero every time they change regions (like they do in the anime) or make them humiliate every Gym Leader in Sinnoh.
But don't get me wrong I do like my GB Theory "Giving your best isn't fighting with the best weapons, it's putting every part of your naked being into battle." - one of my fav quotes.
Max...really watching him in the anime gives a different perspective to what he might be, but that's based on personal opinion obviously. That kid would die without a Pokenav, I don't see him as book worm, but I think he's the type of guy that spends more time studying then trying things out. But yeah I forget he's old now, I'm not gonna detail his age but I'm imagining him with 24 give or take, not a kid anymore gotta change that.
Bye for now**