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best story I read in pokemon, your a good writer

Time's up!? awww, i got here too late, i would have liked to have a part in your story, i really like it XD. oh well, please up date soon!

I just submitted my profile VIA E-mail, forgot to mention...

The Farfetch'd acts like aSh's pikachu, flying around next to Kamon, while the Dratini warps itself around him constantly.

Sorry bout that ^_^

Name: Emma
Gender: Female
Age:18
She's smart, has blond hair and blue eyes. Likes solving mysteries, and always thinks before she acts. She's nice, doesn't talk too much, and has a way with words.
Pokemon:
Male Typhlosion (Level 48; nicknamed Eric)
Female Minun(Level 68; nicknamed Lily)
Male Espeon(Level 49; nicknamed Henry)
Female Venusaur(Level 51; nicknamed Amelia)
Female Marshtomp (Level 51; nicknamed Hannah)

Please put her in Green Division.

Oh, um, forgot something. When I said that things between Gabriel and Jack could 'roll on from there,' I didn't mean Gabriel and Jack having sex, but maybe some kind of comical enemy or rival relationship throughout the E4 chapters, or something. I don't like to assume, and you don't have to agree, but judging from Jack's character, I'd say that he'd get all rushed and aggressive on Gabriel and perhaps Vi or Sam would do something (physically violent) to knock him back into sense and maybe add some brief comic relief. It's just my thoughts, and like I said, I don't like to assume so I hope you don't take it as backseat authoring or whatnot. Thanks for hearing me out!

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Oh, and I'm sure it must sound lame now after I did all that talking about the trainer submission, but I've been following your story since it was first uploaded on aff.net and I simply love it. It's one of the few adult stories here with an actual solid plot and on top of that it's well written/typed. I hope you have great success finishing this one up, and in your next installment with season 2 as well. Kudos to you! Later~

Name: Naxuro
Age: 19
Hometown: Dewford Town
Height and Weight: 5'10, 268 Lbs
Division: Green
Personality: Lazy, fun loving guy
Pokemon: Snorlax Female LVL62 Brave
Rest, Sleep Talk, Surf, Hyper Beam
Ditto LVL58 Calm
Transform
Metagross LVL64 Modest
Meteor Mash, Psychic, Scary Face, Protect
Swampert Female LVL60 Mild
Earthquake, Muddy Water, Protect, Rock Slide
Piloswine Male LVL56 Adamant
Blizzard, Earthquake, Sandstorm, Ancientpower
Wobbuffet Male LVL63 Hardy
Counter, Mirror Coat, Destiny Bond, Safeguard
Description: Fun Loving guy with a heart of gold, Never the Sore Loser, Competing for the love of the sport. Loves his Pokemon more than himself.
Random Notes: This is my actual Team in Emerald expect in Emerald there all level 100.

LOL i personaly "dislike" yaoi or gay anime sex but there are storrys that actualy i like i comend you on that Bravo!

Zane Sex:male Age: 19
Blue Division
Clothes: green cargo vest w/ silver shirt, jeans, sneakers, blue martial arts headband

Team:
Infernape lv54 Flamethrower, Close Combat, Calm Mind, Grass Knot
Weavile lv53 Ice Punch, Night Slash, Revenge, Hail
Gallade lv54 Psycho Cut, Leaf Blade, Swords Dance, Protect
Gastrodon lv52 Mud Bomb, Muddy Water, Rain Dance, Harden
Salamence lv55 Roar, Dragon Claw, Giga Impact, Crunch
Pichu lv20 (non-battling pkmn) Volt Tackle, Thunderwave, Charm

Battle type: strategy based on both offensive and defensive moves.

About character:
A challenger from Sunnyshore City in Sinnoh visiting Hoenn with his siblings. Battles for fun and doesn't mind losing. Outside battles, he's extremely shy towards girls regardless of having 2 sisters. Values his friends, family, and pkmn

Request:
My character could befriend Sam, Jack, and Vi(slowly for her) and they could also meet his sisters (Kate and Asuki). After that you can decide what to do with them.

Hope this isn’t too over the top, aye? It’d be great if you accept him.

Name: Gabriel Morris – Purple Division

Age: 20

Height/Weight: Six Feet, 130 Pounds

Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual

Appearance: Gabriel is of average height, has light skin, and long blonde hair that is always down in bangs, veiling his face. He has steely grey eyes that seem to pique the odd onlooker’s interest. He wears dark blue jeans, a white shirt with a large picture of a Blissey on the center, a thin silver bangle on his right wrist, and a worn leather jacket, with matching brown work boots. His favorite accessory, which he wears constantly are his old large pilot goggles. They’re usually hung around his neck, but during battles, he always has them holding his messy hair up.

History: Gabriel grew up with a normal life out in Viridian City, in the Kanto Region. Well, sans the bisexuality he discovered when he was in his teenage years, but nobody really bothered him about it. From the day he picked up a Pokeball as a kid, he was destined for greatness, or so said his parents. He stormed through the Academy in Celadon and found his first Pokemon, a Chansey, in the Safari Zone. The guy trampled the Kanto League Gym Leaders, but right after he gained his last badge he decided to botch the Pokemon League dreams and retire for a time. He stopped battling completely for two years, then all of a sudden decided to just up and challenge the Hoenn League. It wasn’t hard for him to take the Gym Leaders out, and he was admitted into the Pokemon League Challenge, coming out as the first of the Purple Division member from the Victory Road race. Now he awaits his first battle.

Personality: Gabriel is quiet. He prefers not to stir up conflict, and when spoken to in a hostile manner, he responds with total silence, often riling up his aggressors more. If he has to, he chooses his words slowly, carefully, and with sting to tell people not to fucking bother him. Otherwise, he’s polite enough, and has common courtesy not to show rudeness until prompted to. He’s gets easily offended, however, when people make fun of his shirt. His temper also shortens drastically when he’s commented on his sexuality regarding his Blissey.

Battle Style: Gabriel’s patience is like steel, and cannot be broken by force. He’s willing to duke out a fight even if it takes a day or more. His Pokemon reflect his style, and while their attacks may not be the most potent in terms of damage, he has more than enough buff defense to keep one of his Pokemon battling while his opponents exhaust their entire teams. His biggest flaw is his inability to strike up a proper counter-attack with a majority of his Pokemon, once their defensive tactics have been rendered useless. He only has one offensive Pokemon, but she’s just as reliable as his other Pokemon.


Pokemon:


Pokémon: Talia – Blissey (Favorite)
Type: Normal
Gender: Female
Level: 72
Attacks:
Softboiled
Aromatherapy
Seismic Toss
Thunder Wave

Pokémon: Lilena – Wobbuffet
Type: Psychic
Gender: Female
Level: 66
Attacks:
Counter
Mirror Coat
Destiny Bond
Encore (Retained from Wynaut’s moveset)


Pokémon: Xion – Dusclops
Type: Ghost
Gender: Male
Level: 64
Attacks:
Will-o-Wisp
Pain Split (To put in story terms: Sums up both Pokemons’ health and divides the life force equally among both Pokemon)
Shadow Ball
Toxic


Pokémon: Merru – Flygon
Type: Ground/Dragon
Gender: Female
Level: 62
Attacks:
Earthquake
Rock Slide
Toxic
Roost (Restores health, like Recover)

Other crap: It’d be nice if Gabriel could piss Jack off with his whole silent persona thing, then Jack can go insult his Blissey shirt and then it could roll from there. Thanks again! ^_^ And uh, email me if you have anything you wanna ask.

Christopher
Male
Age:38
Silent man who only talks when needed. He mostly wanders around Hoen looking for a challenge, usually disappointed. Has a younger sister who also is a trainer.
Team:
Lv.47 Tyranitar-F(Titan)
Lv.48 Aggron-M(Behemoth)
Lv.49 Manectric-M(Surge)
Lv.50 Alakazam-M(Blink)
Lv.54 Blaziken-F(Wildfire)
Lv.53 Metagross-?(Crash)
has a few more but too lazy to list them
Put him in RED division
The only request that I have for this character is that you try to find a way to make him a main character. Because he's socially stunted it's easy to expand on his character however you want.
AND WHAT DO I MEAN BY THIS CHARACTER?

Susan
Female
Age:17
Outgoing girl who trys to make friends with everyone she meets. Is the younger sister of Cody(real shocking I know), suprisingly different. Their parents died when she was young so Cody raised her. Although she is friendly she makes no connectoin to maintian those friendships.
Team:
Lv.72 Blaziken-F(Ember)
Lv.69 Shiftry-F(Shadow)
lv.70 Milotic-F(Tide)

YELLOW Division
Same request as her brother, except for the reason to follow him