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Name: Ava
Gender: Female
Age:19
She's brass, tough, and sensual. She has blond hair with dark streaks. She has two older brothers and is always looking for a battle.
Pokemon:
Female Swellow (Level 48; nicknamed Hazel)
Male Raichu (Level 52; nicknamed Dimitri)
Male Kingler (Level 50; nicknamed Andy)
Female Blaziken (Level 49; nicknamed Piper)
Female Sceptile (Level 51; nicknamed Thistle)

Please put her in Orange Division.

Name: Hakan
Division: Red
Type: Fire, likes to attack first
Pokemon:
Vulpix lvl 60 (favourite)(knows all fire moves)
Rapidash lvl 56
Flareon lvl 40 (knows solar beam)
Furret lvl 55 (has hyper beam and sunny day)
Notes: Hakan seems quiet and subdued, but only because he feels more at one with pokemon than with other humans. Sometimes he daydreams about being part pokemon. Durring the fateful event at the league championship, he had rooted on Bradley and actually has posters of him in his room at home still. He can be mischevious, but he usually has good intentions.
Appearance: What little hair he has is brown, and his eyes change color due to him having color contacts. His natural eye color is blue. Hakan's clothes are baggy, blue shorts, a bright red shirt, and a green padded vest. He will often have a smile on his face that says that he might know something you dont.

Ok, my OC. Me! I love self-insertion. My Chacter will be age 27 (four years older than myself) and is about 6'7 with brown hair and green eyes. His party Pokemon are Infernape (Shiny Male, lv. 89) Chatot (Female. lv 40) Luxray (Male, level 32) Lucario (Female, lv 66) and Drifblim (Male, lv. 30) Oh, put him in Jack's division, Orange if I'm right. And put some action with his Infernape and Luxray. As for his personality, he's pretty laid back, and a good trainer. He has 24 badges, eight from Jhoto, Sinnoh, and Hoenn. And he's also gay.

OOO OOO OOO! I wanna give you an idea! (this is personally from my file of pokemon fire red ^_^) ok, get this, an 18 year old girl, black hair down to her ass,and a prissy snob-like attitude. her pokemon are all bug type, a butterfree, a beedrill, a venomoth, and a syther. her names Sariah and she has an intimit relationship with her syther. the pokemon have no nicknames but if you wanna give hem nicknames, go for it. i hope you pick my character to fight Vi (cuz shes my fav character) or ill do something...dont know yet...^_^

doh! forgot important stuff , bedrill and syther = guy venomoth and butterfree = girl. syther is lvl 75, everyone else is lever 45, (she really loves that syther) MAKE HER FIGHT VI, NOT THOSE GAY GUYS! PLEASE! but only if you choose her to acually BE a character in dis...

oooo oooo id also like to see my charicter take down a team rocket member before his match that would be cool XD oh and he caucasion. (really would be easier if i just E-Mailed you all of the info i made for this charicter 8 months ago sence i already have his info...and i dont know your E-Mail address...)

Mark Parastein
Male
Appearance: Messy black hair down to the very tip of his shoulders, brown eyes, 5'11", sleek silver spectacles, laboratory coat, black T-shirt, dark blue jeans, tattered sneakers. Always seen with a distinctive frown on his eyes.
Age: 17.6
Data: Mark Parastein is a teenage scientist who focuses his studies on human-Pokemon psychology, and is one of the youngest leading proponents of "virtual research and therapy". This recent field of science is meant to allow for experiments on Pokemon and humans, as well as stronger relationships between Pokemon and humans amongst other things, without actually causing any physical, psychological or social repercussions by carrying such research out in a virtual environment, thus successfully obtaining data without forcing the involved participants into activities they find uncomfortable. This field of science, naturally, has attracted the fervent discussion and berating from both conservative communities and underground societies.
Personality: Mark's personality is an ultimately complex sort as he hardly ever betrays emotion; only motivation, success, and failure. To him, life is a journey for him to collect as much data about it as possible. He doesn't cheer estatically when he wins, nor does he rant furiously when he loses. Everything to him is a learning experience. Mostly, however, he comes across as tactless when it comes to handling the emotions of others; he tells things like they are but also accepts them that way, even if he doesn't say it.
Tactics: Because he never seems to lose his cool, Mark promises a challenging match to most trainers due to his unpredictability in using his Pokemon. He takes battling tactics extremely seriously and is adept at both fiendishly constructed plans as well as basic tricks. He's mostly able to turn negative situations around to his favour, but he's not impossible to surprise.
Division: Blue

Pokemon:

Dusclops
Level: 73
Type: Ghost
Ability: Pressure
Attacks: Mean Look, Shadow Ball, Focus Punch, Destiny Bond
Gender: Male
Nature: Adamant
Dusclops is designed to capture subjects in preparation for Mark's virtual projects, using its Mean Look attack to ensure success. Dusclops' Mean Look attack is recognised for unfailingly attacking the subconscious of its targets, luring them into his black hole body and towards a completely new dimension for the virtual process. Similar to his pre-evolved stage, Dusclops is not above continuously hounding his targets until daybreak.

Gardevoir
Level: 73
Type: Psychic
Ability: Synchronise
Attacks: Psychic, Hypnosis, Thunderbolt, Imprison
Gender: Female
Nature: Docile
Similar to Dusclops, Gardevoir is purposed to use her powers to seal targets away in a virtual dimension, using her psychokinetic capabilities to generate small black holes after immobilising her designated targets. Her Hypnosis attack is usually used to alter the psychology and thoughts of her subjects. Despite this, Gardevoir is a caring Pokemon who also fosters to Mark's research subjects like a nurse.

Porygon2
Level: 73
Type: Normal
Ability: Trace
Attacks: Conversion2, Tri Attack, Recover, Hidden Power
Gender: Inapplicable
Nature: Serious
Being a virtual Pokemon, Porygon2 is the chief operative of Mark's team that oversees the research and therapeutical processes Mark initiates in the virtual realm. This living being of data is as methodical as Mark is and likewise, is capable of adapting to any situation thrown its way. Porygon2's Hidden Power is unique as it is altered to freely switch between element types to target the weaknesses of its opponents.

I actually started reading your story a few days ago. Although it took me a little while to get into it, Hoenn Harem has become one of my favourite stories here on AFF ^_^ Great job, and can't wait for more.

I guess, since I'm not busy, I'll make a trainer, too!

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Tiphanie (Nue)
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Age: 16

Sign: Cancer

Division: Red

Specialty: "Cute" Pokemon (although one wonders about Tiphanie's definition of 'cute')

Fighting Style: Strategy - find the shortest (and often times most gruesome) way to defeat your opponent without hurting her own pokemon

Body: Nue has mocha brown skin, cropped dusty brown hair, and doe brown eyes. She's short for her age and it isn't uncommon for her to be mistaken for a younger child, a boy, or both.

Clothes: Nue always wears her wire-rimmed glasses (since she's blind without them, a silver ring on her left middle finger and an average sized school backpack. Normally, her outfit includes faded jean shorts, a light blue tank top, grey sneakers, and a pair of black, fingerless elbow length gloves. Overall, she is an unrememberable, unremarkable person.

Personality: Quiet and shy seems to be the best way to describe Nue who always has her nose stuck in a book or caring for her pokemon - except when someone (else) or her pokemon are being made fun of or hurt. Then, Nue's quiet nature belies her true abilities and ruthlessness when it comes to battle. Her pokemon are powerhouses by themselves but, combined with Nue's analytical mind, they can blow just about anyone out.
On a random note, Nue reads just about anything, from Shakespeare to manga. She'll probally be one of the few people who would actually get the names of Jack's pokemon. She also quotes them XD

Pokemon: (Note that all of them are males)
Empoleon(Penpyon) – Level 57
Haunter(Geist) – Level 53
Gallade(Schwert) – Level 55
Arcanine(Chiot) – Level 47
Salamence(Drache) – Level 45
Ditto (Idem) - Level 66

Empoleon was, technically, Nue's starter pokemon, but she's had Ditto longer. She's most likely to use Idem, Penpyon, and Geist in battle. Nue's from the Sinnoh region which has yet to become as bad (Pokemon-wise) as Hoenn is. She lost the Sinnoh league twice, before she decided to try her luck against other trainers from around the world, hence, why she's in Hoenn now.



Is it possible for Nue to have a practice battle with any of the trio? I'd just love to see how well she'd be, matched up against them XD

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story! I can't wait for the next chapter! And good luck on exams, you'll do great!

i sent you a review by e-mail, and i forgot to add her age....she is 17

Hi there ^_^ I loved to read all this reviews and I love when people are honest! The reviews made me wonder and I decided that everyone can participate for the League =D (read “Trainers Wanted”).

Nevyn I know exactly what you mean but *just to defend my characters a little* they aren’t Ash Ketchum’s! LOL I mean come on that guy without a Pokedex would probably try to catch a rock or his own mother =P (he did capture a rice ball in one of the episodes I still remember that ROTFL)
Jack is the only one who may be considered dumb, because he acts without thinking most of the times, Vi and Sam aren’t geniuses but they know what they’re doing =D
I do have an intellectual character, Damien, but I know it doesn’t count since he’s one of the bad guys. And yup the three have no chance in HELL of winning against Team Genesis LOL, right now they would be turned into pancakes. But that’s the way it’s suppose to be *blink*.

I considered adding more main characters but the problem is…I think it would be too many people O_O If you count with Team Genesis (which will be a big part of season 2) it makes 10 main characters…auch. But it's still under consideration.
I hope you don’t take this as an offence I really liked your review (and everyone else's =) ).

As soon as I have time I’ll edit more errors in the chapters.

And everyone is invited to create a character for the League! =3

Thanks for 10.000 views everybody!!