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It's getting a little hard keeping track of all of her pokemon, but it's still fun. I loved the end of the chapter, it was too good, made me laugh so hard.

Cool an update. I am now a fan of your work and the structure improved too. I hope to see an update soon. I'm rooting for you! *Gives muses*

I really love this story mainly because of the different pokemon and the intersting characters. I truly hope you finish this story. Although the format is a little too confusing but other than that I really enjoyed reading *Holds I'm a Jack/Damien fan sign*

omg. this story is so incredible. i love all the plot twists. but why? why did you have to make it be gabriel??? I was hoping he would be a good guy and be all powerful and help vi and the others defeat team genesis.

LOL actually I haven’t sang that stuff in months, I don’t even remember the cartoon where I got that song from. Ok now onto the review, I loved this chapter, you’re finally revealing stuff!
I don’t like Bird pokemons either, in all the games I only capture them to use “Fly”, but Skarmory is actually a great one.
Don’t be so smug about having a shiny Crobat I had a shiny Ponita once too hehehe.
The writing is also better and I think each chapter is getting longer, that’s great.
I think I know which chapter will be next and I can’t wait for it! ^_^

“That doesn’t matter, after we figure it out you may become one of the strongest pokemons who ever lived!” she happily answered before being interrupter by the blind Absol’s bark.

Interrupter?

You shoulkd hire someone to check your mistakes
Btw change the name to something like Hoenn Chronicles or something...Harem doesnt fit here.....

Hi, actually this chapter wasn’t as bad as the two past ones lolol I always write very quickly so some letters get misplaced =P In Portuguese I normally see all errors but in English and French there are always some that pass by me. Next time I promise I'll be more careful. I thought about changing the title too but my sister told me that some readers might not recognize the story afterwards so it’s better to leave it this way. I don’t wanna have to hear her sing the “I told you so” song again so soon lolol. I’m glad everyone seems to be enjoying the story, thanks for all the reviews ^_^

Ummmm so Gabriel is kinda like Half Human Half Skarmory?
Who cares i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!

If I told you I loved you, I'd probably be lieing, but I do love your story. :D
Another good chapter, repeat previous praise and add twelve percent.

Untill next time, this is CrazyIvan, signing off. Semper phi, carry on...

Damnit to hell! I LOST MY FORKING PIE!!

Oh, right, review time, well these past chapters have been steadily more interesting. New characters, crazy powerful wierdos, and more dumbass Team Rocket grunts, although, unless in ten years Team Rocket established forward bases in the Hoenn region, it should still be Team Aqua and Team Magma territory. The mutated Evee was an interesting, albeit wierd addition, it makes it a hell of a lot easier to find out how pokemon are feeling, kudos for the unique plot device. A large houndoom eh? Well, that could be a powerful ally.
I noticed that the team rocket guy had a Tyranitar, a powerful pokemon in their own right, and generaly they don't respect anyone unworthy of training them, so I really don't think that coward of a duesch bag would be well off with it, hell, if I wa the Tyranitar, I'd hyper beam the fucker, and go back to Silver Mountain.
Anyway, still good spelling and format, nothing much to complain about, so that pretty much wraps this rewiew up. I'll be looking forward to your updates. Untill next time, semper phi, carry on...