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I hope nobody’s pissed about that, it’s just hard to keep track of everything after receiving so many info from so many characters and trying to publish chapters with a constantly changing season storyline.

“but what I don’t get is: why did you give all that valuable information away for free?”

Actually I’m trying to test something, there’s 3 common ways of adding background stories:

1 – Starting the story (or a season) with the past; I really like this one and I do it a lot, but it’s useful for stories that don’t have many characters, which isn’t this case.

2 – Adding flashbacks; the most common one, it’s useful but seriously overused and tiring, anyone that watches series like Naruto or One Piece knows what I mean.

3 – Using data; mostly used in series like CSI, basically it’s when someone reads the file of a character, that way when the bad guy gets busted they don’t need to explain why again.

What I’m trying to test is a variable from the third option mostly used in games but not in books or series.
It’s when you have a section with all the info of the characters so that you can choose which one you wanna play with and to avoid having to say all that during the levels.
I’m obviously not doing it for those reasons in here, it’s to see if by previously posting the “basics” you can go straight into deeper issues without having to waste chapters explaining details like the past or how the powers work.

Of course some of that info will be repeated during the story, but not without additional and more crucial details.

Let’s just see if it works, otherwise I’ll just return to the good old techniques lol =P

Basicly, just the team I gave is different. How he looks when I told you is just his coat removed is all, he still have the black shirt, black pants, black shows, eye patch, the left sleeve is long to cover up the arm you know that. O_o

And black gloves. Hell fingerless right handed glove is a staple for him, Reason? To grab feel around for the bottles easier. You try grabing a bottle from a pouch behind you with a glove on. XD

Anyway, except for very minor changes in his look, nothing is new, except the party which I suplied ample info for. Not trying to sound rude DM honestly, it's just it's 1 AM and i'm typing at this time like an idiot again, like I said before. If you need more info just e-mail me at xainRM@yahoo.com

And i'll give you all the information my decaying mind can muster. O_o
(meaning my memory fucking sucks balls on ice. XD)

And once again DM, sorry if i'm comming off as a dick, but it's 1 AM at the time of both of these posts and i'm not sure if you meant myself included or not, if you did i'll be more then happy to fill out the E-Mail thing. You still use the same E-Mail right?

You know, mailing me a decent character description with details and definitive ideas would be much nicer than repeatedly asking to enter the story after I said I WOULD allow your character to re-enter.

I don’t mind doing collaborations with other authors or accepting interesting characters or ideas, but that should improve the story instead of delaying it even more than it already is.

Any requests should be sent to -> darkmaidenpm@gmail.com

I don’t want people to be discouraged of posting reviews or proposing ideas, I just want people to realize that if I was prepared to end the story…trying to leech me out constantly isn’t a very smart idea.

Now, I do keep my promises, I’m just asking for a little comprehension. I’m a young adult with a busy life, if I spend my time with this story it’s because I feel like it’s worth it (developing creative and writing skills).

So summing it up -> I accept good and definitive characters/ideas (without constant changes) that have the potential to make the story better. I will not accept random ideas, ever-changing party pokemon and the name of faceless characters. Why? Because that means I am the one that has to do everything and I don’t gain anything from it.

Take the time to send a decent email with info, propose suggestions, ask questions (all by email).

This all may sound harsh but really this is how life works, when you want something you have to work for it, you can’t just demand or beg for it. Everyone will have to go through this at school or at work eventually.

This isn't a personal attack, it goes for everybody.

I hope everyone will understand.

The info on Team Genesis is now posted, some of it may look like spoilers but it's actually only a little of extra information.

I don't mind Damien being used, just don't put him in hummiliating situations lol.

I'm still trying to decide either to put Vi's party in this Characters Data or on the next chapter. But for now I think this one already has much more info than the first one I did.

Uh...
*looks at my chapter and my notes for my chapter. Then looks at DM's post*

Oh boy...
*backs away slowly*

What exactly do you mean by humiliating? Like...Him being powerless against a summoner or...
*starts sweating*

That's why I didn't ask to be a mentor. My guy has a tendency of "not staying dead." -_-;

And plus I don't think it'll work out really well, since he's not really the mentoring type. Unless that is shes trying to become an alchemist. XD

All joking aside my guy sucks at mentoring besides from alchemy. O_o;

Think of Logan (Wolverine), but different instead of mutant regeneration, the chemicals in his body regenerate him. Also a biological regeneration. Like a normal human heals but quit a bit faster. 1/2 the speed of regeneration of Logan's. It'll be explained better in the rest of chapter two in my story as soon as I stop being lazy. XD

That an fatal wounds don't really work against someone who's life support system is damn near unbreakable. (left arm says it in the story.) And I kind of messed up, it's suposed to be Damascus not Damask. D'oh! Well, same thing really. -_-;

If you need anymore information DM let me know alright? Also another character I use...Myself has some pretty kick ass abilities. XD

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