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by Lechan

person Melitot
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most interesting CC fics I've ever read; I like the idea, naturally, but most of all I appreciate the way you developed and wrote it, stating the years, focusing on the characters' pain and growth, describing the world around them. I might have to agree that Remington is ooc, because I really don't see him ruining a young girl's life like that or killing a whole innocent family to take Rosette away, but he is interesting nonetheless. Baby-Rosette... she's just her old self, so how could I dislike her? ^^ I laughed to tears reading about her in the crib, bossing (or trying to) Chrono around. Then there's Chrono, acting normal again thanks to her rebirth; I've always been fascinated by the idea of the little demon wearing the old clock, by the way.
As for the original characters, I do feel for the poor, new and unwilling mother of Rosette; the part about her story and her encounter with Remington (whom I thought was Joshua, at the beginning - even if I knew he should be dead by that time ^^;) was one of my favourites, not to mention the one about the labour. She is a "real" character, with real situations and feelings. And she loves her baby no-matter-what, at the end.
The ending was beautiful - making Rosette speak the last line after the song lyrics. Good job!
So... if you're going to publish a novel of yours... please let us know =3 I'd like very much to see the sequel of "Wanting more than you give", too!
Kisses

PS: have you a ff.net account too, maybe? *curious*
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(I set up an account for the sole reason of replying to your fic. :)

I had just recently finished the anime (after much MUCH hesitation- ie year plus, knowing the bad ending.) I was depressed. Awesome characters with so much more potential, killed off. Rosette was given a ferking triple-wammy!! >.< Anyhow, depressed. This story gave me the satisfaction of a hopeful closure that the anime lacked.

Your stories are by far the BEST Chrno Crusade fanfiction I have EVER read, period. Your characterizations and plots are beyond amazing. When you stopped updating your Chrno-fics, I was devastated. This was my only means of going beyond what was given and further enjoying the characters! Anyhow, I couldn't enjoy your writing anymore because I dislike Yu-gi-oh and yoai. When I saw a new story from you in the Chrno Crusade category I almost cried!!

I know Chrno Crusade fanfiction does not seem as gratifying as Yu-gi-oh (there are less fans), but I insist, there are people that truly love your stories.

Enough with the big sappy plea.. I really hope you finish off your stories and maybe even make new ones. Re-read your stories or re-watch/read the series to get back into them! I'll be watching out for updates!

You are sooo appreciated!! ^________^

Again, awesome one-shot.

Keri
person MisoGirl
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... that was odd.

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