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for Never Forget Where You've Been

by BishiMistress

person Nenona
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM

I've read everywhere from the beginning of Faith until now, and I must say, nice job ;)
Of course I could just be biased because my middle name is Alexandra XP

I love the way the story is going so far. It's both unpredictable and interesting. To pay you a compliment, it'd be good even without the sex scenes in it(huge compliment, trust me).
I can't wait to see what happens next, and keep up the good work!

p.s. I hate children too.
person vbruce
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEE!!!! Now, since all the dogs in the neighborhood are going "Please, make her stop!" I'll continue in another . . . vein. Sorry, couldn't resist. Fabulous! Kind of figured that Cain would be after the children. His at very least. Fantastic, as always. Hehehehe. I seem to have coined a phrase for the hot bot. Go me! Feel free to use it at your leisure, dear.
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liked that chapter! nice and action packed full of good stuff!

Hooray for mind blowing!! mwahaha! lol i also like making fictional children how i think they should be. you can email me the french whenever you get a chance.

awww Uncle Tres!! thats so cute! ^_^

hahaha that seemed to be a rather interesting trip to the bank. what a bummer he wasn't really that hot. i guess you'll just have to be happy with the memory of what he looked like from the back. lol did he at least have a nice ass? hehe! ^_~
person sheyenne
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^^ sorry i havent reviewed in a while. heh i lost my internet connection >.<
im all caught up now though. this story makes me wanna take French next year heh
looking forward to what you have planned for the next chapter ^^
person vbruce
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! They're adorable. Excellent job as always. By the way, I don't think you have anything to worry about as far as posting in another section. You're writing is very good and I know a lot of us from this section would be happy to support any efforts on your part.
person vbruce
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah, and where have I heard the term hot bot before. Hmmm, sounds so familiar. Hehehe. You know I'm teasing you.
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEEEE!!!* HOW CUTE!!!! finally! loved this chapter cuz it was just so adorable!!! and you had me going for the longest time that i thought the third one was going to be a boy too lol. that was so nice of Abel, he's so sweet! and i want to hug the cute children!! lol though i'm not all that fond of real children.

i think you need to start sticking translations back in there cuz my french is so terrible. 3 years back in highschool and nothing really stuck lol.

hooray for the new chappie!!!! looking forward to more.

and if you ever decide to post stories anywhere else let me know, i'd want to check em out! ^_^
person vbruce
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah the joys of angst and drama. So long as it's confined to story time. Lovely work as always. Loved the conversation between the two ladies. I completely understand where Abel is coming from as far as not wanting to do a fun run after Alex had been drinking, even a little bit lowers inhibitions. Anyway, as usual, loved it. BTW, next chapter is up. ~evil grin~
person Kaie
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh... just when i thought it was time for a lemon! although i know you couldn't make it that easy... very nice chapter. Keep it up, i look forward to the next time!
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAAAAAAAMMMMMMMIIIITTTTTT!!!! lol...dammit! i SO thought Alex and Abel were going to be okay by the end of the chapter. damn damn damn! haha thats the first thought that went through my head after i finished reading.

by the way...i'm still reading it!! LOL! and i'll review every chapter since i know when they get here!

i'm glad though that Alex talked about what happened, i think she really needed to just spill it to someone.

still....dammit! i was so ready for Abel and Alex to get better. so much frickin' angstiness!!! arrrrgghhhh!!! ^_^

hooray for next chapter! can't wait!

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