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for Never Forget Where You've Been

by BishiMistress

schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay finally a little more of the children involved! and i am going slightly nutty with the amount of angstiness! there must be smut! hopefully soon lol! i'll keep watch. ^_^
person vbruce
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned how utterly fabulous you are lately? If I've been remiss in it: You are FABULOUS!!! Love this scene and it is so like Cain to use one of Alex's children to get close to her. And thank you for liking my little story, I'm deeply honored.
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that would be a twist if Cain had the ability to control some of the machines. glad some of my questions were answered, thank you. and no this chapter was not stinky. i liked it. i thought the angsty-ness between Alex and Abel was going to go on forever! i'm glad its somewhat going towards a normal note. at least they're on speaking terms. hopefully it will be getting better.

i want to find out how the others (especially Abel) interact with the children. should be interesting. looking forward to upcoming chapters!
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your writing has never and will never suck!!! Take as much tike as you need with this story, you know you will always have faihfull readers. You not only have a talent for wrting but you interact with us and answer all questions as best you can in practically every chapter you post. Those are things that make your work such enjoyable things to read. I am also truly very sorry if any of my comments upset you and that you've been down. Hope everything is better this week. Your story is as lovly as always.

Cheerio *~
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
intense chapter! can't wait to find out what happens next. i'm assuming that the first part of that chapter was like a flashback or a memory of some sort since the children weren't born yet? i hope they make an appearance soon, i want to see how they react with other characters in the story. and where Hugue went. i'm glad there is finally another chapter! thanks for posting!
person vbruce
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Praise the Divine, finally! No, it didn't suck, stop that. We'll have to institute a no self bashing rule for you. It was a lovely and very intimate moment. Excellent job as always. BTW, the next chapter of Darker Angels is up. Loved this as usual.
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:( :( :( is it coming back yet? *sniffle*
person vbruce
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Darling, you will never be able to please everyone at all times. Write what feels correct to you and if only half of the readers like it, fine, that's their loss. The whole point of a good story is to make you feel something. I have no problem with Alex enjoying anyone she so chooses. Normal relationships are difficult enough to maintain much less ones with mitigating circumstances. Don't even get me started on the "True love conquers all with no work" crap that is so often spouted. *Gets off soap box* Thank you for your time and attention. Oh, yeah, keep up the excellent work.
person vbruce
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah! Lovely as always. Thoroughly enjoyed the scene in the garden with Abel and Alex. As always, an excellent read.
person sheyenne
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.......wow as always you make me jealous with your writing. awesome chapters!! *taps chin* i cant believe i never heard of hellsing. you make it sound interesting...is it? i wonder, perhaps ill go watch the first episode

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