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Lovely chapter. Thank you for posting. Hugs to you. I'm sorry for your loss, darling. I know that feeling all too well.

hooray! its so good to see a new chapter finally! though i understand the purposes for not updating. hows that new computer treatin ya?

so sorry to hear about yur grandmom *many hugs* its hard. we recently had a death in the family as well. it sucks and makes people miserable. but it'll be better. i for one am glad to see you back! even if the next chapter doesn't come for a little while. there's only so much to keep me entertained here. ^_^

Okay, where are you and where is the rest of this? You can't just leave us all hanging. Well, I guess you can but most of us reading this would really rather you not.

^-^ Wonderful Chapter!! I cant wait to find out what happens next......Poor Alex, having her own son used against her....*chases Cain weilding a steak knife* But is it really going to be much safer in the empire...Cain could just turn Cen against Set or anyone else right?......*sighs* So many possible poblems, so few solutions...... Please update again soon!

I have returned!
I had a busy summer, but from the looks of things you have too.
I've very much enjoyed the chapters so far, but two teensy details:
1.) I've seen a few typos, not many, just be careful, spellcheck doesn't get everything...
2.) I keep getting confused about who's doing what action. If you're saying words, then someone besides the person who's talking does an action, it's confusing for me. Please try to put who said what, or at least go down a line before putting action. For example:
Confusing:
"Well it's not my fault you're a flirt." Abel shifted uncomfortably and blushed.

Clear:
"Well it's not my fault you're a flirt." Alex said, sticking her tongue out at Abel.
Abel shifted uncomfortably in his seat and blushed.

OR
"Well it's not my fault you're a flirt."
Abel shifted uncomfortably in his seat and blushed.

See? I do love your writing but that's the only part that I sometimes have to go back and read over to clarify things in my head.
Oh yes, and recently I got two different Trinity Blood T-shirts...$4.99 baby! Thank you Suncoast!

Hmmmmm I am gonna attempt the poke, poke, nudge, nudge as well............Update please if you please as you already know Faith was an addiction and NFWYB is too I'am tired of being sober and need an update fix preety pease!!!!!!!!

Okay, where's the rest of this? *poke, poke, nudge, nudge*

Wow I've been gne from this story for awhile, though everything looks beautiful as usual!!! I am asuming the storys on Hitus??? Hope you can update soon XD!!! I also hope everything is going well for you in lofe and general seems you've been down latly..........cheer up its better to be happy parents can suck trust me I know!!! Later

R.Lamb

that was a pretty emotional chapter but i think it fit in well with the rest of the storyline as i felt something like that was going to come up sooner or later so it was well done! it worked. ^_^

Oh, such lovely and disturbing family moments. Fabulous as always. What the hell is emo? I'm old, remember? I think Abel has a very good reason to worry about things. BTW, next chapter of Darker Angels is up.