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by mokie

schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! sorry wasn't able to review after so long!!!
was out of country that i can't read your new chapters!!!
urgghhh now really regret it but nothing i can do about it... sorry!!! read your new chapter!!
and a REALLY great turnout as the evil muraki (kyaaa) is now targeting Tsuzuki???
and want to give our cute Hisoka to other person.... want our Hisoka to be tortured more muahahaaha
however this turnout is a great one... so happy about it!!! wish you can upload another chapter ^^
though been a year since my last review... but this story still my favourite ^^ hope you can update soon!
thanks ^^
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi!!! This is shu again!! THANKS for the update. hahaha sorry I haven't been reviewing the chapters from before because I forgot my password but so far the chapters have been excellent ;) just waiting for the hehe naughty scenes
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh and are you play dmc fan too? I'm almost finished with DMC 4(on dantes missions) but I'm stuck in the stupid forest. Not much of a fan of nero but he's okay as long as he doesn't steals dantes spot light XD
person isilya
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no... you're really a sadist! it was like a cold shower to read the last sentences of muraki. good luck for the writing.
and do your conversion of your boyfriend into a bi is working?
good bye!
Isilya
person cocoke5
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i am glad that you are bck and now the story is on . love it and cnnt wait for more of the story. i hope that he know what he is doing by taking in soka and now he have the leader come after him... welcome back . miss you. your fan cocoke5
person mamarita
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update. I really like this story- and yes, question answered. Can't wait to see what Mr Devious has planned for our heroes! DLS
person Sheigo
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg, this was an amazing story! I completely loved it! You are an amazing Author with a real knack for word play! I am looking forward to the next chapter! please update soon!!
person Omnni
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love and hope there will be more soon.
person Tieo
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
w00t! Thanks for the update! I was starting to think you disappeared! Yay! Disaterous break down because fic wasn't updated for a very long time has been adverted! Don't feel bad though, I haven't updated my fic for a long time too, most of the same reasons. Just that I have a kid and a boyfriend, keeps me extremely busy!

Anyways, Good chapter, could be a tad longer though. Just a tad! It's so great the Tsuzuki is so protective over Hisoka! It's absolutely adorable!

Thanks again and hopefully you'll get you next chappie up fast!
person isilya
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At least a chapter ^_^ I thought you had stopped writing...
thanks for the chapter, I'm looking forward to have the next one, good luck.
You can handle a boyfriend AND a girlfriend at the same time !!?? O_O
must be difficult, good luck for that too...
Do they know each other and all the connections between you?
If I am too indiscrete, don't bother to answer. ^_^

Bye

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