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for Yakuza

by mokie

person mamarita
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel really badly for Hisoka- but if Muraki knew where Tszuki lives, why wasn't he followed home? Ahhhh the suspense!
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story tremendously. It was very well written and the main charactors were all painted with their own personality. I wonder if you would send me an email when you update. Hope we don't have to wait for months, take your time... and hurry up! ^ ^
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS A GREAT UPDATE CHAPTER XD
its been a while since u updated ^^ but this chapter worth it
i agree that lives are important but please don't abandon us to wait too long... i do willing though hahahahaha since this story really worth the wait!!!
person Tieo
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update! I was getting antsy, checking every day, disappointing for sure. BUT now that you have updated I can resume my happy aff.net life!

Anyways, onto my review! This chapter was good! I surely though Muraki was going to still play with Hisoka from afar. Then again I did forget his very sadistic nature. Bad me. You always leave off in a good place to, keep the readers wondering wtf is going to happen next. I hate it when that happens but I love it at the same time. It makes me want to read more! SO WRITE MORE!!!! AHAHAHAHAHA
person isilya
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello !! I'm a great fan of your story !! I hope you will quickly continue it, pleeeaaaaassssee !! ^_^ I 'm looking forward to read the next chapter.
bye
Isilya
person cocoke5
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
will hi mokie i was happy to see that you post the next chapter of yakuza up and i was happy and love the chapter and now that taszka know that hoska know mr muski and what will muski do now that he meet taszka go after him. up date soon and the story is real good this is the 3 time that i read it. up date soon with more chapter of the story.
person Voluptas
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job! This story continues to rock and Muraki is just so evil :)
person Tieo
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person cocoke5
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes that chapter is real good and i love it and i can not wait for the next chapter. where muski see soka and tuszki and i hope that they get out be fore he see them. or he fell for tuszki. can not wait up date soon. love ya
person Voluptas
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, who can blame Tsuzuki for thinking Hisoka is so cute. He is too cute for his own good. What a cliffhanger to end this chapter with! I'll be checking this site often to check for the next chapter. Great work on this chapter.

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