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for Rivalry

by gryvon

person critic
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. I liked it.
person Ruingaraf
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I liked this a lot. I think it captures the pairing very well. :D
person PeachIceTea
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too lazy to log in, sorry. But anyways, this was one wonderful one-shot, thank you!
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AW. That was damn cute for a PWP. great writing. I loved it!
person zeynel
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!!! ^^
person Verloren
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. *squee* This is just... perfect. Absolutely perfect. You have a wonderful way with words that totally pulled me in to the story, and how you write Akira and Hikaru is so IC and so THEM.

(As someone who doesn't understand Japanese, I appreciate that you translated the last two lines at the end, by the way.)

Thank you SO much for posting this- you've totally made my day now.

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