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i want to know please? please?

Ok first of all great fan fiction on gravitation, you made this a great story to read and i want to know what happens when yuki see hiro and shu together both wet and half naked. You have good writing structure and i love it, to help you out be like hiro you idiot you konw i love yuki why would you do such a horrible thing to me. Yuki hears this and turns and punches hiro and then kisses shu. Shus in shock but does not care he has yuki and yuki puts shu in his arms and carries him to the car then into the appartment. Oh i wonder what could happen. keep up the writing i wan to read the next part please now im begging.

That was so bizarre, I was listening to music and that song came on right before I even got to the lyrics in your story. Anyway, love it so far.

Ahhh, nooo! Shu, go get him!

awww loving this story and how youve written it is great shows different side to yuki

MORE MORE MORE MORE! There, now stop begging (and stop being a tease about having the next chap. written).

Wow, this is a great story. I hope you continue it soon!

I really like your story! I know that Shuichi will probably end up with Yuki, but I'm beginning to enjoy when Shuichi realizes that his relationship with Yuki is going nowhere and I was really happy when you let him waik out on Yuki - so maybe you could torture Yuki a little longer. And it was nice to have a little smex with Hiro. Hiro is a nice guy and he also needs some loving!
Looking forward to more of this. Thanks so much for sharing!

I seem to be one of the only people reviewing.... ANYWAYS! I still love the plot and i bet now Su is going to have to explain what he was doing almost naked and wet with his best fiend!! XP LOL plz update soon ~P.S. What with the bolding?~....~Not that i dont like it.....im just asking~

Wow.. I completely want to know what happens!!! cause i bet its going to kinky...XD hurray ...great job keep up the great writing!

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