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November 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's one of the greatest tragedies that this story was not continued beyond its fifth chapter. I always had a fascination with Kanako's character and while the fourth chapter is something of a mural of emotions, I liked that this was heading in the direction which mixed the erotic and emotional aspects of the story into one whole. Great read!
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February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are truly a master of your craft. Putting Kanako in those disguises seriously tricked me, and man, was that awesome! I've never been suprised by a lemon before now, and I've got to say it's an awesome experience. Keep doing waht you do, this is the best Love Hina lemon I've EVER READ...
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November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW. This story is one of the best I've read. You shouldn't be so hard on yourself, I LOVE this pairing. Kanako is my favorite character (I don't know why though, I liked Sarah more from her first appearance). Anyway, this story is great. I look forward to reading the rest of it. Keep writing fan fiction, you have talent my friend.
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story i cant wait for the next chapter
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update this? And please go back to doing more Keitaro/Kanako hotness without the BSDM.
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great work, really.
And without looking at other ppls reviews... Would it be Half-Life? Unforseen Consequences chapter?
And without looking at other ppls reviews... Would it be Half-Life? Unforseen Consequences chapter?
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story, thanks for updating. I hope you will continue it, Keitaro/Kanako is one of the underrepresented pairings unfortunately. I also would like to have her dress up some more (even if not in a sex scene) since that angle of her makes her really unique (next to the ventriquolism(?)).
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Quite interesting... though I wonder what other tricks Kanako might have. And Kanako is an exception... when sighted naked, she'd sooner jump him than hit him or faint.
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Kanakofan:
Sorry, I've never used this section to respond to reviews, but I'd like to recommend that you read the entire chapter.
On a side note, that review sort of answers what I was wondering in my notes at the end of that chapter, at least for one person.
Sorry, I've never used this section to respond to reviews, but I'd like to recommend that you read the entire chapter.
On a side note, that review sort of answers what I was wondering in my notes at the end of that chapter, at least for one person.
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.......genius man that whole haruka situation was gold it completely fooled me and it was at least something that isnt seen in too many love hina fics which is a shame ..getting back to the story you should definetly update soon