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great new chapter and an awsome way to improve the plot this is one of my favorite stories

As much as I found you most recent chapter with Haruka spoiling the couple's fun and having her way with Keitaro I didn't like that she had knocked out Knanko just so she could sleep with her cousin. Which ponders me to beleive it will evetually lead into a nice warm wet threesoem between the three. I jsut happened to have read yoru other fic Garden of Thanatos and man this lemons had my fulll attention if you know what I mean. Oh I didn't now about that. It makes sense with Kanako being his adopted sister and Haruka his cousin. Talk about a huge shocker.

When will the next chapter be out?! Please update ASAP. I want to read some more Keitaro/Kanako action.

Not bad, but Kanako is Keitaro's ADOPTED sister meaning she is NOT related to him at all. So you may want to amend that content thing.

I liked the new chapter you put in so please keep it coming

There is no shame in seeing what your weakness is. But that did not deter from the fact that it was very well written, and quite steamy. =3 I've always loved the Keitaro/Kanako pairing, though not many others did, and at one time thought about doing something about it, but never did. kekekeke...You've got a really good grasp of the physical aspect of being able to write, and I'm curious as to see how well you can develop the emotional aspects. Granted, this story barely had little like that, it would have been very hard to implement something like that into the story without making it insanely long, there-by creating an alternative to the story. But I would not have minded that one bit. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

-Narshe "Dizzy Gear" Delvar-

Is it over now? Big :) if it's not over. Even tho they're sorta related, Ka/Kei is uber sweet, and I uh.. (word failure here) 'Dig' the way you write them, and their internal struggles and external sack romps, hehe. So moar, please and thanks.

Chiao,
TEOATG&B

Well, the first chapter was really good, and I'm glad to see it's going to continue.

To be honest, as much as I hate Naru and can't stand the Kei/Naru pairing (especially since it's canon), I never really could see a Kei/Kana pairing.

This is until now. Most fics that involve Kanako relegate her to a subplot, but this story (and Snooping Around Pays Off) blows my former conceptions away.

You have an exquisite attention to detail both in and out of the erotic scenes, and that's what really makes them worth reading.

I only ask that you continue.

Well that was the first het I’ve read in a long time it was pretty good I read almost nothing but yuri anymore

With Love; Imasuky Lomae

Most excellent. It was a lot shorter then the previous chapter, but i have no real complaints. i look forward to the next update!

Wow!!! I did not think they would be anyone capable of doing a great Keitaro,Kanako lemon but you have proved me wrong. I liked your other fic with those two and Shinobu. I hope you continue on with this fic or at least write one more Keitro,kanako lemon. Continue with the writing and don´t worry about romance. I am only concerned that they´re doing it becuase they love each other or because Kanako wants to fuck her stepbrother. If you do make another lemon with these two have some WAFF in it OK