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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Continue? Please do. i wish to see more.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness-
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness-
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March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is only your first fic ever? Its marvelous, A++ without a doubt. I wish you'd reconsider your choice and add more to this fic, definately not one-shot material. It screams for more development :)
Update soon please, I hope.
Update soon please, I hope.
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You Dick! There Not Related! Kanako Was adopted!
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the story it has great potental make it evolve into a long running fic
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An interesting and very enjoyable story. I don't think there are enough Keitaro/Kanako fics with her being an adopted sister and all.
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just one minor correction.
Keitaro and Kanako arn't blood-related so it isn't incest
Keitaro and Kanako arn't blood-related so it isn't incest
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you've done an excellent job with this story, don't even worry about it.
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
truly something to behold
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really good
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a good fic I prefer Mokoto and yuri but this was a good het great friswt story but a tip for the sex secnes just go with what feels right i've tried to write like other people but it never worked out just let it flow naturally and thats all I have to say other than hope you post more fics soon
With Love; Imasuky Lomae
With Love; Imasuky Lomae